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Reviews for: Picking up the Pieces
Mercedes
2009-08-05 . chapter 3
I am so impressed with everything you've written.

Ha ha, thats all I can say.
I can't wait to read the rest. :)
Tonnerre
2009-07-27 . chapter 2
He's there, but now he fights for us!
silverangel83
2009-01-06 . chapter 3
Still loving it, but there's just a couple of questions I have. If Ben had treated her so badly why would she have ever even thought of having dinner with him back in Geneva? Also, what was with the glass falling off of the table and shattering? I thought that was going to be some foresight to something or maybe it still is? Regardless, keep it coming! :D
Yzak Lover Extrodinaire
2008-11-04 . chapter 3
OMFG AWESOME! LOVE IT!
GabrielsDoubt
2008-09-28 . chapter 3
Still Catholic after all this? Following such an emotionally charged chapter(s), will you give us comic reprieve with jollying around the mansion, or are you going to resolve the issues first? I have, once again, enjoyed this chapter quite a bit and look forward to the next installment.
NachtcGleiskette
2008-09-27 . chapter 3
Aww this is so sweet! It's good to see them happy again. Now whens the baby coming?!

And yep, Blackberry! I work for AT&T ;)
NachtcGleiskette
2008-09-25 . chapter 2
LOL I read this on my Blackberry during my break at work today and NEED more!!
GabrielsDoubt
2008-09-24 . chapter 2
Back for round 2!

These two chapters have a little less gausto than your previous story, which still led some questions to be answered, such as where did the 1st scene (chapter) happen in the storyline. But enough, I do like that Jermaine and Lumi are back - will they meet the professor and do they have mutation too? I am curious to see what you will reveal. Also, any estimate on how long this one will be? You are great at keeping up with updates. The pitiful few stories I have written are rarely if ever updated because all my plot bunnies, as I have been told they are affectionately called, commit suicide on me.
NachtcGleiskette
2008-09-23 . chapter 1
Oh there HAS to be more.
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