Love the story hope, the third chapter comes up soon.

Wow, that's harsh...Poor Lex, I hope this new guy doesn't hurt him like that...Although my sympathy is ruined by the image of Puck teasing Owen like that...XD

great.i love the way you wrote lexington,Puck and hudson,not to amantion hudsons and lexs relationship and all love to read some more."You got some real talents there,lad" like hudson would say

This is so exciting!

This is the only Puck-or-Owen/Xanatos story I've seen with such promise so far, so I feel a terrible sadness that it hasn't continued D:

I absolutely love this, what there is of it. I'm really curious what would happen next! I don't want to put pressure, but I just want to remind you that there are people out there who enjoy this story a lot and would love to see it finished. I really like your characterizations of Puck, Owen, and Lexington, by the way.

Will you be continuing this tale? I certainly hope so, because I find it to be brilliant.

Good story.

Love your writing. Just keep it up.

*applause* Well written my friend, well written; I can't wait for the next chapter, though no pressure is being laid for it.

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i'm really liking this please write more