Wow. You know I think this is a little harsh. I feel really bad for Steve. But I must say, you have a very big imagination. I hope you continue with this story. Thanks!

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Aw, I like Melanie! Since the DVD hasn't worked properly on our player, I still don't know what Steve is like. So I can't help feeling sorry for him. -cries-

Don't be too mean to him! I hope his owner isn't too horrible... :D

Love the chapter, babe! Sorry for the late review! -hugs-

The tension in this story keeps rising as Steve gets deeper and deeper into this underground world. I would advise him to start running while he still can, but I doubt he'll get very far. The tone is so ominous - I'm listening to the Dark Knight soundtrack as I read this, and the orchestra music rising and growing faster and louder is the perfect tempo to this story.

Keep on writing, girl.

FANTASTIC chapter, sweetie! Poor Steve! I loved the interaction between him and Melanie!

This story is really great! I like how you opened the possibility that Nadia might be running a mass operation instead of just training Steve by himself.

aww I feel so bad for Steve, he's being so dehumanized. Poor baby. I do love this fic though and I'm glad you *finally* updated it. I was beginning to worry you had abandoned it.

I hope Nadia eases up on him a little bit, I know he killed her brother and goodness knows I'm waiting for him to get another spanking, but she's so determined to make his life hell.

I love this it's been a month please update!!

Aww man, Steve; I have this sinking feeling that Nadia WILL need to give you a reminder before the night's over. Not that that's such a bed thing. :D

It's good to know that Nadia has a bit of a good side, even if it's only a little bitty bit good. :D

Loved the update, babe! Good to see you writing again! -hugs-

I still absolutely love this story - it has so much pace! (despite the slowness of the update, more more now now!) I really like the story line, and how Nadia is showing little bits of mercy towards Steve - as much as I want him to get what's coming to him, I feel really sorry for him and hope he at least gets someone who cares about him in the end.

Still loving this story. Please hurry up and write more.

Poor Steve, sleeping in cage. He must look so sweet with his blanket. His character continues to fascinate me. The closer they get to their destination, the more intense this story because.

You must update sooner.

Poor Steve :( As much as I detest him in the movie, I do feel a bit bad for him. He's screwed.

This is a really good fic, it's a lot darker than what you usually write, but I like it a lot. Update again soon :)

Oh my oh my, Jens, has Steve finally met his owner? I've been waiting for this chapter luv. It's about time! :D

Hard times ahead for Steve, yes?? Do say yes! :D

I'll write you back soon, I swear! Sorry! :(

Just saw the movie, and I felt sorry for Steve the whole time because I had read your story before I saw the movie.

Please keep writing because this story is getting interesting. The plane ride is getting ominous and creepy - I wouldn't trust Raphael for a second. But for reason, I really like Nadia.

Keep it going, girl.

I just wanted to quickly review this before I went to sleep:

So nice to see you've updated this, luv! I had almost forgotten about it!

Hm, Raphael, eh?? Wonder what he's about? Is he being nice to Steve for a reason? :D

Update this again soon, luv! Looking forward to more, and happy 2009! -Smooches you-