I, an extremely loyal Zutarian, am completely in love with your characterization of Mai.

You, more so then the divine creators of Avator, make Maiko (a ship which, no matter how many times I rewatch the series I just can't see the chemistry for) a plausable, even laudable, pairing.

Lovely.

I couldn't really read the story, it was too choppy and the grammar sucked. x_X

This was an amazing summary of Mai and Zuko's relationship...they way they interacted and felt about one another over the years. I love your Mai/Zuko, both here and at LJ. You are extremely good at capturing both their individual characters and their dynamic together.

I think the post-Beach section was my favorite.

I loved it. It's like a condensed timeline, a moment from a monumental time.
It was really... monotone. Which is a good thing in this case because it's focused on Mai.

Well done.

That was so beautiful :) I've been wanting toi read something that had a scene in the Earth King's throne (first time seeing each other) for the longest time

Okay... I'm still a bit incoherent, but still I'd like to say: It's beautiful and wonderful and so many things and- it's Mai and Zuko. I love it.

Regrettably, I cannot make a giant less than three on this review. But yeah, way up there, to the point where it makes me want to print it off forever and ever. *adds to your C2*

Very good :D Loved it :D