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JasonTKD
2009-11-12 . chapter 10
"bad surprises instead of sudden breezes were what triggered scary feelings"

Batgirl's "Oh,sh*t!" sense is tingling! lol
writergirl712
2009-11-12 . chapter 10
Well written chapter (the explanations for some of the actions are good to put in), though I have to say that I doubt that Cass would be so helpess in a situation in which she can't see. She can certainly hear, and I'm positive that Cain would have taught her to fight blind-folded (he's an assassin, after all, and they're always prepared for any situation). Yes, her biggest advantage involves seeing, but the lack of sight shouldn't have rendered her unable to do anything.

Besides that, good writing as usual.
Hephaestus01
2009-01-18 . chapter 7
Very interesting story! I look forward to the next chapter.
Hephaestus01
2008-12-22 . chapter 6
This is such a fun story to read! Sorry to read about your technical problems and I am glad you were able to retrieve your work. Happy Holidays and I look forward to the next chapter!
JasonTKD
2008-12-20 . chapter 6
Uh-oh. Looks like Sergius was actually meant to be a hostage or something.

And seems like Cassie may have to do a little detective work on her own now. Ah well, she can handle it if she puts her mind to it.

Batgirl might not be as smart as Batman, but she wouldn't be in his group if Bruce thought she wasn't able to do the job. (He can't afford to have dumb allies, after all.)
1000GreenSun
2008-12-19 . chapter 6
Coolio!! Can't wait for more. Your Christmas Special sounds cool too. PPMS! :D
Hephaestus01
2008-11-30 . chapter 5
Oh I can't wait for an update! It is rare to find a good Cassandra story and I love the way you write her!
1000GreenSun
2008-11-30 . chapter 5
Very epic! As always, your work is a pleasure to read. PPMS ^.^
funvince
2008-11-30 . chapter 5
Ah, classic misdirection. The pirates weren't the real threat, the chandelier was. And you came up with quite a clever way for Sergius to realize that Cassandra wasn't actually responding to his verbal warning.
Kirbilius Clausius
2008-11-14 . chapter 4
There is a problem developing. If the problems are supposed to be team work between brains and brawn, then the problems shouldn't simply be time shared (i.e.Fight then puzzle then fight then puzzle). They problems should require both simultaneously (i.e. defeating bad guys labeled in canti by number of strokes, as that's how Mandarin writing is alphabetized or cutting through the right but only the right object). Don't get brought down to typical video game 'puzzles' like 'Find and destroy 4 objects that look like this' either.

On the other hand, I very much appreciate utilizing the under used characters. That's what fan fic is supposed to be, more of what we don't get from the work itself.
funvince
2008-11-03 . chapter 4
Sergius is an amusing character and I like how Batgirl is teasing her with her abilities. I wonder if he'll be able to reason out how she's 'reading' his mind or if she'll have to tell him.

I hope the Spook's plan involves a bit more than Cassandra going through the house beating up minions. Some death traps might be interesting.
funvince
2008-11-03 . chapter 1
I like the way you write about how Cassandra sees the world. Her insights about masks and names and her mild disbelief that others can't see what she does were quite intriguing. And you came up with a villain who quite ably took advantages of her weaknesses.
lost prince
2008-11-01 . chapter 4
Very nice
Keep up the good work
JasonTKD
2008-10-31 . chapter 4
"“No,” she said in a reassuring tone, shaking her head to emphasize the denial, but she was grinning now"

I kinda feel sorry for Sergius. How's the poor guy supposed to be able to have naughty thoughts with her around? (doesn't exactly help that she's hot and in a tight costume lol)

Not to mention that if he starts thinkin about her, well , she knows that he knows that she could kick his ** easily. lol
1000GreenSun
2008-10-31 . chapter 4
Very... AWESOME! PPMS ^.^
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