Good Stuff JoS!! How did I miss this little treasure? It might not actually be fiction. Look, there they go, riding off into the sunset :)

Wonderful story. Very easy to put yourself into the clerk's position and "watch" them.

This was a sweet story. I liked it.

OOh! Bra-vo! I love it. Well done and enjoyed the different perspective.

What an amazing idea to see Jack and Sam with the eyes of a third person,who doesn't know them!You have this great talent to write like you simply paint a picture with the most tender colours.Thank you,I wait for your next story.

Wow, what a great story! I just love it! It's really cute and they look so perfect. You've an awesome writing. I think the clerk POV is a good idea to describe their feelings. If only it could happen in the show...

Aw, that was a massive squee from me too. Aqushy and mushy, just what I needed. Lovely!

Alright, let me say for the record, I have never... "Squee'd" over a fanfic. story in my life.. Or at least, not out loud.. As I read this.. I "squee'd" about.. 10 different times.. And reread it and did double the amount every time and woke all the residents of my apartment up..

Forget cough up a fluff ball, I just expelled a lifetime supply of cotton balls out of every pore in my body.. I absolutely adore this story! Its just so.. CUTE.

And I am in love with JSR and you did nothing more than heighten it with this story. The perfect thing to end the night with in my opinion. :)

*Sigh* If only the writers read this.. and some of the other amazing JS stories on here..

Keep up this amazing work because I just love it. :) [And sorry for the long, carried out review..]

Peace&Love,
MC New York

Ah, terrific, JoS. It's so good to see you writing again. I love this, but I kind of feel sorry for the clerk. She didn't get a sale! Maybe after Jack and Sam finish 'talking' and deciding their fate, they'll return and buy a few things. Hope you'll be inspired to write more this season.

Hm...perhaps we can say this is fan fic canon? I liked seeing them through another person's eyes. That's always nice, and this clerk was particularly observant! Thanks for the very enjoyable read!

Stunning :-), we'll never see it of course... but we can simply assume this happened right?