Hey I was just wondering... What happened? Are you discontinuing the story? :(

. . . . Why does this fic suddenly only has one chapter and complete? Where's the other fourteen chapters?

i would have liked to read the continuation... i saw your site and it said you could send the other chapters for readers if they would like to read it. would it be possible if you could send me a copy by my email (on my profile page)? if you could, that'd be great! thanks!

this perspective was really interesting, i liked the angle that you took it at. very exciting!

Hey what happened to the other chapters? Last time I checked there was more then one. Did they get deleted? Or are you rewritting them?

I was reading this story ... and suddenly it disappeared? Did the Gate got it? Equivalent exchange, maybe? If we give reviews the story may show up again? Uh?? Or maybe you have a secret author/artist reason to do pull it off the air? Thanks!

I agree with Roy. Ed is extremely sexy! ;P
Poor Roy, for thinking that he can never have Edward the way he wants him.
Him and Ed make up the best yaoi couple right beside SasukexNaruto. :P
The fic was great. You'll be continuing it, yeah?
Thanks for this! Keep up the good work.
And well done!

Love,
Niki

I read on your LJ that you'd discontinued this story. While I'm sad to see it go, I trust your creative instincts. You've given us some amazing stories, so if you feel like this one needed to be pulled back, then I'm OK with that. Good luck with NanoWriMo! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

What?! I came back to review for the latest chapter, sixteen, only to find all of the chapters after chapter one missing. Why did the rest of the chapters disappear? Is it the site doing it?
*Confusion* >.<

Hey
I appreciate the difficulty of writing 50,0 words in one month. I've tried to do this, but no luck :( In any case, I'm curious about the removal of the chapters of this story. I love it, and I wanted to read it again, so I was understandably devestated when I saw that it had disappeared. When I saw that Under the Influence was updated this month, I was so excited, only to find that nothing had been changed.
Is there a reason for all this?
I love your stories, all of them, never left a review because I was busy jumping from one chapter to another. And then I would go to sleep because I would normally be up until two am reading them :)
I hope that your participation in NaNo Writing Month pays off. I'd love to read it.
Take care.

Are you planning on giving us some adveture by sending Roy to that bank? well, that'd be so great, but I don't know if I can picture him doing that task.
And dear Ed, open your eyes and see what Roy is about to risk only for you and your well being. If that's not love then tell me what it is. Maybe you're still distracted with all that mess Cole is making you do to him, that devil boy.

this is getting interesting...it would be nice on a side note to have a sequence of ed and cole in the office ;) if u know what i mean... perhaps even in a nightmare sequence ;)

...One week? *prays for Roy*
Guess the idea of bank raid is still appealing to me... not that I wanted to do it though. XD But either ways, Ed had found out where the document is, so I guess leave Roy to think of something would be best... after all Roy's more to the mind while Ed's more to the action, right? XP

Anyways, a great chspter as usual. I'll be looking forward for the next installment!

You can do it, Roy. And if you don't... well, I'll magically have to apparate into this story and kill Cole for you, then smack you for not being able to do it. This is your future lover we're talking about here, Roy. You've got to rescue his butt from Jerkface!

yeah, watch this totally be a trap. XD that would suck. really bad. I bet he's gonna get caught. I'd bet you, but you probably have a vague idea of what's gonna happen...despite the fact that the story has obviously kidnapped you, sat you at a computer, and put a gun to your head. I've had stories like that before... -__-

man, roy has weird dreams. haha, watch him be a prophet.

well, good luck with NaNoWriMo...I hope you update soon anyway. XP

I like it although it seems that the chapters are all focus of the library, you could possibly change your point of view to Ed, but just keep writing! Evil cliffie, again..."."