Oh, how wonderful! I'm glad everything worked out well, and to know Rose is being nice is good. Great job!

Wow...I think I'm gonna cry! It's just perfect! Everything and everyone at the right place! Really amazing! So so sweet and emotional! The interaction between Edward and his baby daughter is adorable...There is not enough of these moments in the book. I even love the baby's name! bravo!

wow!!
i'm overwhelmed...so pretty!

Also very good.
I like this birth better, the one in the book was so... I don't know, but I do know I didn't like it.
I guess I'll read the story that follows this.

enjoyed that one.

I read all three of your oneshots and I loved them. I had my problems with BD, one of which was experiencing the pregnancy from Jacob's perspective. We never really got to forge an attachment with the baby because of that. Secondly, we missed out on the B/E moments and the Daddy Edward moments as well. Sure, we got the scene where Edward hears the baby's thoughts but it's abruptly cut off when Jacob leaves the house. I like how you emphasized the family dynamic between B/E and their daughter. Truly beautiful. Especially, reading it from Edward's perspective, how this little child gave him so much hope...it was so beautiful. He is an amazing father and I wish SM had highlighted that more in BD.
Btw- your writing is impeccable, so true to canon..the characters are so close to the real thing. PS, I love the name Elizabeth Alice...I always wished Nessie was named something similar to that!

My favorite line:
My daughter in Bella's arms. This was the culmination of my existence; the reason for my being. I lived for them now and ever would. Isabella was my beating heart, and Elizabeth my undying soul.

Beautiful. =)

WHAT THE BUTTS!!
WHY DOES THIS STORY ONLY HAVE 11 VIEWS?!?!?
THIS IS THE BEST BREAKING DAWN REWRITE EVER!
SO ADORABLE AND HOW IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN!

**Big Sigh** That was really wonderful. Do you plan to continue with the story?

edward praying. something i thought i'd never c

“That’s why we’re h-here,” I teased, feebly.

Edward rolled his eyes. “Not funny, Bella.”


Loved it... loved how supportive Carlisle and Esme were... while it was very significant how Edward took charge in tbe book.. I think Carlisle could definitely played a bigger role..

beautiful ending... I felt so much more connected to the baby in this one... from JaAcob's POV I was so detached.. All I felt was his anger and I-must-kill-them thoughts and then he imprinted...

Hm... so how is Bella going to be changed now? And what about Jacob? I'd love to know how it ends in your version!

-sob- OMG, that was incredible! I'm speechless. It was so beautiful that I am literally crying from happiness. Love how you did Edward's PoV, awesome job.

Keep up the great work!

~Ness

that was very good!

oh wow that's so good!