make another chapter

Vegeta's the hero?

Too dramatic

really awesome!

i wish this really happened in the cell saga

Hmm, very interesting. I like the fact that Vegeta has the dominant power level in this battle, he is after all my favorite DBZ character. Naturally I want him to be the strongest. Anyways, nice descriptions; could be better in the beginning. But good fighting scenes. Caught a few mistakes, one that was so vibrant and obvious, " Crane punches, tiger slashes, heabutts, sucker punches, they were all coming mere centimeters from Naruto"... yeah, you're not writing a Naruto fanfiction, remember that, ;-)

Oh this is quite interesting. I have to say you get points for the concept, I do like it. I believe that Vegeta should have had a bigger role in the defeat of at least one of the major villians, since he didn't kill any (Freeza, Cell, Buu, or any of the movie villians)I think he deserves to win. You wrote very well and I look forward to seeing where you go with is. I am interesting in seeing what will happen next.

O what HAPPENED, i always wished that vegeta kicked ass in that saga it would have been the best, anyways update soon