At long last, I think Pichu's finally getting the hang of using his Pokeflute. Which is good, because I'm sure Togetic would kill him for keeping her in a dirty underground tomb for two hours trying to get the song right.

I haven't reviewed for awhile... though I've read all the chapters. Yes, that's how good this fic is. I read straight through one day, nonstop. No kidding. But I'm rereading, so while I'm at it, I'll review.

I think my favorite part of this chapter was back in Kokiri Forest. Everyone was freaked Pichu was still alive, Noctowl was horribly maimed, and apparently Leafeon has a lot of 'interesting-looking magazines' she reads in her ‘personal time’. Hmm... wonder what she uses that time for...? o.O (Though it’s not very hard to guess.)

Moving on, I'm so glad you included the Torchic (Cucco) maiming! I was so stunned the first time that happened to me... more along the lines of: "Was... I really just killed by a bunch of chickens?" Although... those Torchic attacked Pichu simply because he tried to catch one... Maybe that really means no one at all seems to like Pichu very much... well, at least Togetic tolerates him . . . Somewhat.

Sharp and Flat were hilarious.

“Oh, and remember when Mom told you your pet Goldeen ran away? That was a lie. I killed it.”

“YOU KILLED SHANEQUA? THAT DOES IT!” Slap fight ensues.

I lol’d to death.

Well, that makes two songs in the bag. Four altogether, if I’m not mistaken... Now... onto chappy numbah eight once again! Update soon!

AH PIGHU YOU JUST DESTROYED THE WORLD AH AND wait... won't he come back as a adult or something? In the game he did... well, link did. maybe pichu will evolve when he wakes up!

Oh my god. This story is MADE OF WIN.

UPDATE plz

AH THE WORLD IZ SCREWED DAMN U PICHU! _

Fantastic, as always.

It really amuses me that you're going throughthe entire story and actually keep up with it.

Bravo-I would be bored before the Deku Tree Dungeon. :)

Your story's randomly funny, which is a good thing. I like the idea of using Pokemon as the characters instead of the characters with Pokemon.

PLEASE continue! I like it so much because it's so freaking random!

MAJORA'S MASK HELL YEAH MAKE IT MAKE IT! _

Hm... now... which scene was the most hilarious...? The under-appreciated Raticate, The Super Torchic disaster... Or meeting Epona...? So many choices.

I wonder if Raticate ever WILL get anything outta his 'hard work?' Hm... meh, he'll probably still be doing the same thing years from now with the same minimum wage pay.

Pichu has done it again! How one can't tell a Shiny Torchic (WHY CAN'T I HAVE AT LEAST ONE!) from an ordinary Torchic is way beyond me... And simply giving him a bottle of milk and telling him to shut up was ingenious. *Slaps an imaginary high-five with Wigglytuff*

And lastly, Epona may just be my favorite character besides Pichu and Togetic. (But then again, I like all the characters so far... just about everybody disses Pichu. Mewtwo's two lines last chapter were pwnage.) Those mule kicks were epically awesome. And lastly, maybe someday, SOMEDAY Pichu will learn to use his PokeFlute... Maybe.

“Wha. . .oh, it’s you!” Wigglytuff said after a moment. “You were the kid what was puttin’ all the moves on my daughter!”

“Yes sir,” Pichu said brightly. “And if you don’t mind, I’d – ”

Wigglytuff pointed the barrel of the shotgun directly in his face.

That made me laugh... SO hard...

Ah, The Expository Chapter did not fail to bring the funny! XD

Once again, a hilarious chapter that made me laugh, cry, and then discretely snicker a little. Well, Pichu now has the news of his role in Hyrule. And he's learning (Sort of) my favorite song (Besides Lost Woods) in the game!

And... OMG, Pichu's an attempted child molester! Or would it just count as rape since they're around the same age? Again, that guy never fails to make me laugh...

“Hey Iggly, I got some candy in my van,” Pichu said with a devious grin.

“You don’t have a van.”

“I will someday! That’ll show you.”

Luckily Princess Eevee has some sense. Hyrule would be screwed if she didn't. vv

Sometimes it feels as if there isn't enough narration, but that may only be me. You're style seems to work better around dialogue anyway.

Anyhoo, can't wait to read the next chapter. (Gonna do that soon) so toddle-loos 'till next time!

"...You know about the Triforce, right?”

“The Triforce? Oh, yeah. Trust me, I know all about the Triforce.”

“You’re lying, aren’t you.”

“Completely."

Lolz

Yes, more Poke/Zelda stuff!

This fic is really well-written.

The random cussing gangsta Octillery made me very happy, and Vaporeon is as crabby as Ruto...

I really hated this dungeon...

:)

This story is SO funny! I can't wait to read more! If there was a scale from 1 to 10, this would be 10!

This Story Rocks I love it I almost feel out of my chair laughing. Wonder whats gonna happen when he meet Vaporeon/Ruto

mabye instead of him carrying Her (how will he carry her she's like 3 or 4 times his size) he will try to get her to carry him ending up in a huge Bucking Bronco Fiasco.

i usually dont read these types of stories but u are hillarious man i was laughin in class good job keep it up