I love the story so far. Your style is very neat and detailed in a wonderfully exciting way. I also love that you use your knowladge of hunting as well as horses and everything involved with both in the writing. ( Do you actualy bow hunt and ride? I do.) Also it tickles me that you named the blue roan filly ( blue roans are one of my favorites besides stocky friesians) after a compound bow XP> I am not sure if you are aware of theat but Hoyt ( the bow I use) makes a bow called the Katara. Anyway I am working my way to the last chapter just had to say that.
Yours truly
Lacey

Okay, after reading the first portion you did before the rewrite I retract my statement that I dont like romance in my novels, it just makes this story flow. You did a great job on the later chapters before you started the rewrite and now I must know more!
Keep writing this, dont let it die please!

This chapter was very well writen and kept my interest through the entire length, which is suprising considering that I normaly dont like romance, but it seems to balance out well with the story line and the action. The clifhanger ending makes me want to read more, along with everything else in previous chapters! It sometimes seems to be a bit disjointed, but that could just be me geting distracted while reading. Keep the chapters coming and I'll keep on coming back for more!

Yes...review for the poor. -tosses one in a random dented tin cup-

This was amazing hun...granted, I am new to your story and have only read the revisions thus far...but I am still positively smitten with it! It is different than the Zelda fics I have read as of late; but in an original way that has me more than welcoming the change.

I look forward to furture revisions. Yet something tells me I am probably going to go back and read past chapters tomorrow. Lol, I have to know what happens and I REFUSE to wait.

Kudos on the great fic, I will be hear to read and review from now on.

blackghost7

I just found this story and barely finished reading the very first chapter. I noticed that you're posting a revised version of it from the very beginning but I wanted to read it all, old and revised version. I must say, you have excellent grammar and I like your writing style :] I don't really get what's going on on the first chapter, but nonetheless I will continue reading it :] 'cuz the way you write is just that good! :D

Thank you for all the wonderful chapters.

My internet cut out right before I submitted this.. grr.

Okay so, moving on.

I know I've probably said this before, but I envy your writing skills. Fantastic.
Especially in displaying the personalities of characters, like with the interaction between the three characters in the beginning. I mean, I even had a full idea of how the nurse acted or thought, and she wasn't even talked about much.

Poor Tanya for not remembering the right things, and poor Link, 'cause if I were in his place, I would be pretty dang frustrated lol.

Also, the Link and Tanya scenes at the end were cute, I love those moments :)

Your number 1 fan/ awesome reviewer,
Midna 8D

Sorry for the long wait, hun. Life has been on so hectic. Don't worry though, I'll be reviewing this story to the end, even if some reviews may be a little.. delayed.
Seems like a good day for Venessa, a victory for her army AND a new love interest. What could be better? It's nice to see Venessa is getting her chance afterall.

Yet, way to end the day with horrible news. Zelda just had to ruin the moment, haha. Well I'm keeping this short so I can start reading your next chapter~

Your faithful reader, Midna.

This chapter was so good! Not to mention totally awesome and incredibly sweet! I can't wait for the next one! -is hyper now- ^_^

That chapter was really good! Can't wait for the next one! ;)

Finally! Where were you woman?

So I finally got around to checking my E-mail, and look what we have here! It's been so long though, I'll have to reread your whole story to refresh my memory.

I just read the chapter and I must say, I do admire you as a writer. *thumbs up* You really are talented. I do hope you continue this story, or I'll hunt you down and make you, lol.

If I find time I'll make more pictures for you, but these days I've been overwhelmed and rarely have free time, lol D:. I'll let you know when I make some more.


YES. Thou has returned and you will stay here, right?

...

right? Don't leave me, XD.

Oh and about the chapter length, it is kind of long, and I think you can pull off making them shorter, and just update more often. I think shorter chapters sooner is better than long chapters over a long period of time, lol. That's just what I think anyway. 'Cause you know, everyone likes authors who update often ;D


Midna out.

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?!?!?!!? I THOUGHT YOU HAD DIED OR SOMETHING! The chapter was good also, I just would've liked it to be longer...

Poor Vanessa. :'[ She has a good reason for the jealousy, I suppose.

You did a very good job with this chapter. I could sort of picture the whole scene in my mind as I read. :D

Aww. We've got ourselves a jealous Vanessa. :3 Nice strategizing, Zel. Good job with the battle scene. Not too long, not pathetically short; a good combination for the battle scene. I don't really like reading overly long descriptions of blood and gore, but if it's too short, it doesn't make too much of an impact.

Not bad. First chapter's interesting, and I like your use of the English language. Make us proud. :D