OMG i cant believe you had me in tears all for a bloody Goldfish.

it was so sad all the way through and then the ending was hilarious

laugh my fucking ass off.
thats hilarous.

love it

OMG, just read your standalone and I'm laughing my ass off at the ending. At first, I felt terrible for G&T, because, of course, I thought you were referring to a human baby. Then Troy mentioned the parcel and I thought, okay, maybe it was a puppy or a kitten that they had cremated, especially when he mentioned the garden, but the toilet? OMG. I've had sick kittens that I've tried to nurse back to health and I've had the same feelings of watching them sleep, it's so sweet, but a goldfish. I guess people could feel that way for a tiny fish, as I can get defensive if someone doesn't understand my love for my pets. Anyhow,that was seriously funny. Great job.

so funny

hahaha
jackson was a goldfish lol
nice story! :]]

'zac3fronluver'

WTF!! that was so mean!! i was nearly in tears and Jackson's a friggin GOLDFISH!! ARGG! it was so good though... loved it

xD I loved this! I was so depressed, and then I just had to laugh at the end, amazing!

omg. i seriously thought it was their son. oh my gah. haha. good job.

lol! that was one of the funniest oneshots ive read so far GREAT JOB!
-JennabelTiffany

OMG, I thought it was a dog but a goldfish LOL...

JENNIFER

*snicker* That was good. I thought it was their kid at first lol.

ROFL! Wow! YOU SO had me going there! I was like "TROY!" when he said he was gonna flush jackson down the toilet and bury him in the back yard.


LOL... gabriella talking to a fish all night... lol... I thought Jackson was a baby!

Good job!

Haha! I knew this would have a funny ending and I was dead right. Lol! A goldfish though, I was thinking more dog or cat but hey whatever floats your boat.

Great one shot Kylie.

hey!
that was a good story-but why would gabi be so upset about losing a GOLDFISH? and why would she get up at night and coo to him?
ur stories are awesome tho-ure one of my fave writers here on fanfic!