|Reviews for Provoked 1 Rising to the Occasion|
| daydreambuff 6/19/11 . chapter 1
This is cute and funny. I wish you had chosen to add a second chapter, but I see more than enough pre-Sheyla on your profile to make up for it. I find the 'before' moments for this relationship are quite nice to read about. While being stuck in a door is certainly amusing, all I can picture is the unintended nightmare fuel aspects. Like being stuck in a door and DYING there. :(
| MagicalSocks 2/11/11 . chapter 1
HAH that was hilarious xD
| Nr.Six 9/11/09 . chapter 1
o what a fun story! Please continue it?
| BlondieChemGirl 12/10/08 . chapter 1
Great - loved this little story. Going in and reading some more now. Thanks, BlondieCG
| dispatcher652 11/1/08 . chapter 1
Great ending. I love the flirting between them.
| Sweet Cocoa 10/22/08 . chapter 1
Oh Please continue! I loved the flirting between John and Teyla!
| crypticnotions 10/6/08 . chapter 1
Oh, you have to continue this. It was funny and classic SGA. I love the flirty nature of Teyla and Ronon's knowing quiet and Rodney remaining clueless. Awesome story.
| noro 10/4/08 . chapter 1
keep those chapters rolling in that was great and funny fantastic work
| shiratdeborah 9/29/08 . chapter 1
"Mud, ...Think of mud. Oozing brown mud…""
TBC? You bet! This was hilarious! Hihihm. Poor John ; ).
Ahm, tbc - reminds me of - hope to read the continuation of The Guardian soon, *bats eyelashes* preetty pleeazze?
*Cookie? Hands outinspiration cookie to muse ; ))
Great fun, thank you,S.
| kaitebug 9/28/08 . chapter 1
what does tbc mean? any who i love it.
| AlbinoMonkeyC 9/27/08 . chapter 1
| espergirl04 9/26/08 . chapter 1
That was amazing...seriously amazing. And I'm looking forward to reading more!
| janib 9/26/08 . chapter 1
Did enjoy that, sorry it wasn't on screen so we could see what was happening!
| Cielito 9/26/08 . chapter 1
Ruby's back! woho! There are only a few writers that can literally make me laugh out loud, and you are one of them my dear. And HELL yes, To be Continued! I want more!
| Mary 9/25/08 . chapter 1
LOL! That was really great! Innuendo is always fun! I'd love to see a fun side to Teyla in the show...please continue!