SORRY, I am just can review for one chapter, but don't worry, just this time I can't for review your all chapter VAMP story..
maybe, next day...
hm, I see you just write PROLOG in chapter one?
amazing PROLOG! I very very like HidanKonan! please for write ONESHOT for this pair, and uh-oh, don't forget for continues VAMP story chapter 15 (you know chapter 1 was PROLOG)! I just can say keep write!

THANKS BEFORE!^_^ (full smile)

I skipped the chapter so I could review, lol.

I never expected a vampire story about the Akatsuki, lmao. Yousaid on your profile something like "And VAMP, E!!"
I automatically thought "SEX SCENES!" So I guess I am the perverted one XD I guess I am, cuz I saw nothing in the description about pairings.

This is an awesome chapter! I hope Sasori lives.

NU TOBI! D8
You'd better make him live, dammit. D<

Keep writing!
I ever remain your obedient reader, Emily, the Slytherin Princess

...Raptor? :D cool chappie, the whole guardian angel business is intriguing. A guardian angel for a vampire? cool! ^_^

It was Raptor, wasn't it?! D8

This is awesome, I'm relieved that Pein is dead. Poor Sasori! He better be okay!
BLARGH.
~Rai

Go Raptor!
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Why does no one put Tobi as first priority? He should be.

Hmm, I dunno lol Please update soon!

wow baby this is hot totally hot I love it, the last scenes ..do that moree

Deidara is Tobi's father? O Did I get that right? Great fight scene! ^_^

wow... what an action filled chapter. ^^ nice work. I look forward to the next chapter

Ugh! Not a cliffhanger! Please please update soon!

That was an awesome chapter! Can't wait for more..!

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WHAT DO YOU MEAN, YOU'RE ENDING IT?!
-ahem- Sorry. I really like this. ^^;
Yesh. o.o; I hope Tobi's ok.

Keep writing!
I ever remain your obedient reader, Emily, the Slytherin Princess

OHMYGOD.
I almost spit my tea out from the suspense, dang it. XD
My gosh, this is getting good! My only word of advice is, if you can, exaggerate the scenes a bit more or make the chapters longer. Other than that, THIS IS AMAZING.
I love Deidara and Madara's power, btw. 8D

~TheHaiku~
(Rairox64, if you forgot XD)