I'm reviewing for this chapter because this is where my attention waned. I understand that this is based on an RPG, but since the OC McCoy is taking everything over, the story is probably going to lose a lot of the readers who aren't the author's fellow RPGers. That's fine if that is the intent I suppose. The story also has a lot of grammar and usage issues, especially there/their/they're and your/you're misuse.

Overall a reasonably good idea that's going to appeal to a very limited audience.

Speaking of transporters, can you imagine having to walk throught the entire death star? Either they had molecular transporters, or a very fast system of trams.

signed the good dr.

Kewl. XD

~Stormy

Personally I hope Picard sides with the Rebels... the old republic is closer to the Federation's own ideals than the empire is

update soon

SE

Very, very nice addition! Hopefully Hk will make a referrence to Revan at some point. God chapters!

Yay, HK is alive! Got to love him. Go on youtube and search for HK 47 quotes. You'll laugh, over and over again when you realized all you missed in the games, especially if it's from the cut content. Yes, HK 47 versus Borg... HK wins by a longshot. It would also be hillarious to see R2D2 and C3P0 meet the duo.

signed the good dr.

Oh~
LightsaberBorg are WIN.

~General Everin Stormclaw of the Many Titles, High Priest of the Crazy Hand, Master of the Emerald Stars and Acolyte of the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons and the Last Hairlander, S/He Who Knows, out.

Uh oh . Borg with lightsabers, dark jedi, and assasin droid! ( yay Hk-47 us here! who knew droids could last 40 years?) awesome chapter! I can't wait to see the upcoming conflicts ahead!

Well great chapter, I can't wait to see what the Enterprise is up too... one thing I noticed is why is it always the Enterprise D and not the E? A Sovereign class is more kick ass and capable than a Galaxcy class, use google to find the exact capabilities for a Sovereign class if interested

SE

I'm predicting a rise in productivity. 0.0 :) good chapter. I'm anxious to see what will happen next! good update :D

Good chapter, I prefer hearing about the Enterprise.

Update soon (er)

SE

Good Chapter

That doesn't warrant an M rating.

Yay XD
Uh-oh... they're going to adapt to Lightsabers. EEB.

Maybe different colours have different frequencies... Hmm...
You rock. XD

~General Everin Stormclaw of the Many Titles, High Priest of the Crazy Hand, Master of the Emerald Stars and Acolyte of the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons and the Last Hairlander, S/He Who Knows, out.

Uh borg sex... Yeah seemed plausible only after star trek seven. Though to be honest it still would be a little creepy, they are after all part machine. And Jeth Onasi, huh wonder who he's related too?

signed the good dr.

Hey I forgot to review this, I'm so sorry, update soon

SE (EH)