Loved the way you filled in the gaps and left me wanting more.
Ah... how I love Peter.

I like your stuff, it would seem :). This is the kind of quality I was looking for when I came to find Fringe fics in the first place. Nice job! This is beautifully written and appears to be a very accurate insight into what could have been going on in Peter and Olivia's minds during that scene. I have nothing else productive to say except that I quite enjoyed this. Great job!

^_^ The ending was really great and poignant. Nice drabble, short and terse but with a good dash of emotion. Good job!

Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! I really liked it, and Fringe is looking like a great show to be entertained!

Okay, so this gets a review for being the first Fringe fic - nice job! Loved it - short and sweet but very good!

Okay, let's try this again since the site seems to have spaced my first review. Hm. How did that review go? ... Oh, yeah!

*adores you for writing a Fringe fic* Did I miss this on LJ? Shame on me!

As always, you have a talent for capturing the voices of the characters - apparently any character, actually. :) And, that holds true here. I really enjoy the Peter/Olivia dynamic, and you've managed to roll that all up into this lovely little fic. (Although, on a sidenote, I refuse to label it Oliveter. That's just...no.) Anyway, I enjoyed the story and hope to see more from you for this show. :)

Nicely written. I kinda wish I could say something more about this, but...

This is interesting. I'm assuming it's a one-shot, but it's enjoyable.

Honey I watched the first ep of this last night (yes, finally, the UK catches up) and I very much liked... and more I think you have captured both Olivia and Peter's voices perfectly here. I felt so bad for her with her disastrous love-life timing :( Have you watched more of the series now? Still enjoying? x

heh, i think that this is the first Fringe fic on the site. very nice :)

hum we need a name for peter/olivia ship

really really well written. It's a nice glimpse of her emotions behind her buisness first appearence - I feel like such a nerd but Fringe has so many fanfic possibilities.
well done.

You so rock. I have been dying for some Peter/Olivia Fringe fic from you and voila! I come back from vacation to this little jewel. (I confess that the potential for Lerdo fic for this story is one of the reasons I was so excited you liked it). Can't wait for tonight's ep! (And the potential for more Fringe fic, of course). They are going to be the most fascinating pairing to explore - who doesn't love the idea of delving into the character of the "bad-boy genius with the mad scientist father"? You've nailed them - great ep-reaction.

Doc

I'm freakin in love with this show already...
I think its fantastic...
this rocked and was nice to see someone writing about it...

fab

I am so absurdly stoked that you wrote something, even a short something, for Fringe. I love you BONES stuff (even if I am currently underwhelmed by the show) and to see that you picked up on a little thread of conciousness for Fringe makes me so happy.

I think you would do excellent in captureing Olivia and Peter's characters, as you have with Brennan and Booth. And since the show is just starting, its ripe with possibilites.

Please continue to give a little time to Fringe, the fandom needs all the great writers if can get! Bravo!