Cool story, like it :)

I love those two too :O Great job!

This is brilliant. Every single line. Just... pure genius. Gah! You have my admiration.

Yes. Yes SO much. Yukimi and Yoite have to be the two of the best characters in any series ever, and you portrayed them flawlessly with this. I know about Synesthesia, and I adore how you modeled your descriptions after it. Absolutely gorgeous writing. XD And I absolutely must mention that Yukimi's comment about the boar made me grin like crazy. That comment made the story for me.

Keep up the amazing work.

-Roseille

Is there any way to say how truly adorable this story is? Yeah, I love those two so much. And the details were great, they really painted a picture in my mind. Whoops, didn't mean it like a pun! *laughs* Great job! I hope you write another one.

I love your fic, well, my english is not very good, so forgive me for the mistakes.
I have some problems to read, because you used difficults words, but my dictionary save me, and i learn a lot, and, Yukimi was really cool, i love him

Wow, really cool fic. Short and sweet. I loved how you had a simile or metaphorical color for each sound, taste and smell Yoite experienced. Since Kira takes all of those away I'd imagine he'd have to come up with some way to remember those sensations for as long a s possible. Thought not my fav pairing in Nabari, this fic makes the pairing feel very real and comfortable. Thanks.
~Akire

love it!. think u can amake miharu/yoite fic?