I really love this story. The words flow so nice together. I even cryed a little. Just wonderful!

You must write a sequel, this story was absolutely fascinating, beautiful and stunning. Marvelous job, you definitly captivated me.

he's the old man

SAVE HIM!

So sweet and I truly hope he means all that he says.

Love it!

such a sad story so far, but its fascinating

Wow, you've captured my attention. You gave me shivers reading this first chapter.