Wow. I didn't expect that to go over like that. I like how you've got Naraku involved with Rin in such an intimate way. It perverts the nature of the story somewhat, and Naraku was meant to be a sick, twisted person, yeah?

I think you could have worded some of the phrases and sentences better, but that's just my opinion. When describing things, I tend to get a better image of the item when there are certain words used.

Otherwise, I really like where you're taking thing story. I can't wait for the next chapter. ;D

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gosh I loved this chapter so much..I can't wait to read more it is a very good story...your still a grat writter

Good start.

loved it!

Good job:)

another great chapter. I love this story, and can't wait til things really start off between kagome and sesshomaru. hope you update soon.

I loved it! I especially liked the Fluffy/Kagome interaction. His miko, indeed. hehehehehe Gatenmaru is quickly becoming one of my favorite characters, too. He's so...evil...it's sinfully yummy. I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next!

I hope I get to read more of this story it is very good,,I think it is great

Great story, u have me hooked!

Wow...that was so freaky, Naraku that is. He is SERIOUSLY loosing it! Love the story though! UPDATE!

loved it

great update. i can't wait til this story really develops.

o my, i foresee a very angry tai and a very hot kags going hed to head for a bit, kikyo to asst. Inu to back up. tears and wails, and finally they'll find a blood trail, and their mother's a whore.. man i adore this story its dark yet intriguing.

You stole the words out of my mouth. Naraku is losing it...but in a creepy, good way. And I absolutely love the Sesshoumaru part. Adored it beyong belief! It is so wonderfully written. Actually, I really liked the Yuri bit, too. Oh hell. I loved the whole thing. I cannot wait for more...

OMG, he killed her! Update Update Update Update!