please update this is an awesome story and it makes my sad to see it like this (unfinished and seemingly on hiatus) i hate when that happens to good stories!

please update

I thought Kira seemed familiar. Good story by the way, sorry if this looks like I'm falling asleep and writing, it's because I really am *yawn* but since I really like this story I'm going to stick it out and read.

Naah... They aren't OC )

How is Gaara suppose to go in the water when he's wearing pants and boots?

O_O NOOO WAAY... Gaara laughed! And not an evil laugh but a real laugh! Woah... this never happened before! Not even in other fics!

This is like wow.

And oh man I haaate getting tickled. It IS torturous! I have very weak stomach muscles so it hurts a lot! When I can't stop laughing, I'm like begging to stop, and I try to force myself not to laugh but I can't T.T...

*Gasp* How does Sasuke know Gaara's last name? Did Gaara even tell them his last name?

And awwwwwwwwwwwwww! *squeal* Sasuke and Naruto are so cuuute! I can't believe they cuddle! kyaa..

"when his feathery hair tickled against my neck and shoulder"

"feathery", get it? Cuz his hair looks like a duck's butt! Well I guess even feels like it XD. lol I dunno if you meant that pun.. Sorry I'm being lame _

and another *gasp* who's watching them?

and lol when you mentioned Kira I was thinking of Gundam Seed XD I didn't even thought of Death Note. And actually I haven't read any LXLight fics... I guess I should try it out. )

Awww.. Iruka is so sweet and kind )

And ooh a song for each chapter. Yes! I needed new music to listen to XD

This is a great story, but you haven't updated in forever! UPDATE!

Awww so cute hey who's Dom?

This is such an amazing story and I would really appreciate it if you could update again is such an amazing plot idea and I know the rest will be just as great. I have benn thinking nonstop about ways for this story to go and I can't wait to see what you do with it.

Love this story it is really funny and really very cool I hope u will update soon

gaaahhhh! why was this never finished! this depresses me... it was so awesome... i loved a lot!

if you ever decide to continue this id love u forever!

anyway keep up your awesome talent for writing!

plz and thank you!

Love your story! Can't wait for more!

] this story is really good! please update soon 3

Things never change between those two girls. LoL So, you'll be continuing this some day soon right? I'll be waiting! But not long. Don't keep me waiting. I will find you. And you will be sorry. You will write/type until your hands fall off. You've been warned. No. Not a warning. A promise. _