I like how it really represents how broken down and desperate Sirius was. You crammed in lots of emotion in 66 words. It's so meaningful. I just thought, "Poor Sirius."

YW: I'm on a "read lots of storys about Sirius" rampage. So . . .it was good. Makes me feel just a bit better. Thanks . . .

very very good. i can see his thoughts being that. :D

I would sign in, but I'm too lazy to bother. Anyway, I like this poem. It's really good.

This is really good, I like how you didn't make Sirius completely sane, because of the Dementors' effect on him. Actually, I wrote a fic from Sirius' POV in Azkaban, called "Joy. He was sane in that though. Good work!

Yuo write angst so well. Poor I feel bad for him. Nice job! Yourway of writing poetry is great!

Wow. That's really, REALLY good. That's all I can say. It's amazing. Well done.

you say he's at hogwarts quite a lot, don't you?

Very good at pushing the thoughts of a not-too-sane man into a good writing format. I love your stuff!

Miss B.

That's really good. I think you did a great job of capturing Sirius's thoughts in Azkaban.

I liked it. I can see Sirius thinking this while in Azkaban. I just adore Sirius-he and James are my fav characters. Great poem!

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