AWW!! sniff... sniff...

I've just finished reading your story & felt it would have been terribly fair NOT to review since what you did was totally EVIL! I mean how could you leave me in this tension! I NEED to know what happens next!

seriously now, here's what I think:
OUTSTANDING! You've absolutely impressed me! I feel like a simple "more please! asap!" will not suffice to outline the magnitude of this story, therefore I believe a more proper review is in order:
PLOT: very, very original... & very good also.
ACTION: what can I say I got so caught up last night that my folks had to force me to bed(it was past midnight!)
EMOTION:I refrain from making any comments on this regard of your story for some very SERIOUS reasons:
1)I can't see anymore!
2) my chest hurts!
3) my tension has reached a dangerous point!
[look in what state have you just brought me! lol!]
CHARACTERS: I love them! especially Severus who is beautifully well-written! no need to worry about ooc, this IS a fanfiction after all! lol.
UPDATES: this is not fair! no ! definitely not! why did this chappie have to come to an end so quickly? why?

PLUS: you've managed to surprise me so...
all in all, a brilliant idea embodied in a marvelous, well-written story!

well, I suppose you got the main idea: VERY WELL DONE! write sequel SOON!

SINCERELY,
~moon~

Believeable and masterfully handled -- both the characterisations and the actual subject matters of addiction and moving on. I thought the Snape-Harry interplay was exquisite, and both were very true to form even if the situation was (after DH) an AU.

Excellent work!

my god you actually brought a few tears to my eyes. very good work!