you win at life

That was very wonderful. I felt as though I could feel their hatred for one another. well done. :)

I like this story bcauz its kind of based on what actually goes on in Fruba u r so right about yuki and kyo always fighting I love this story from start to finish it had me *ROFLMAO* XD

Love it Continue It?

Oh, this is just lovely! I like the depth of it.

Hahahahaha! Holy crap! That some funny stuff there. See ya,

SGH

XD! M... Someone should really stop spying... It's bad for his health. Lol, N'who... I hate really does mean I love. -Nods smartly- Oh! Foods ready, Ja!

-Kit and Mach

OOH! will you continue?

I don't think he'll be out by Easter. Ouch...

OMG! lol that was great and outa this wordly written. Awesome work!!

Wow, I went back to Fletting Fancies, and almost missed the second chapter. Heaven forbid. But I came back immediatly. "Just something new" does not bode well. Ah, and there it is. The 'scene'...and Ayame...oh dear. Love it. *Obviously*

Oh. My. God. ilp8v[psff\bl;fmndas! HOW did you write such a perfectly wondefull heartbreakingly beautiful fic with these two! Such perfection...okay, I'll stop now. *Time passes* Not quite. I LOVE YOU~! Fav'd.

This fic makes me wonder what would happen if Yuki really did die. A new rat would be born, obviously. Would Kyo be enough of an ** to beat up on a little kid?

Part one...was REALLY HOT. And Part 2 cracked me up. typical Yuki reading it so calmly. write more, please, i love your style. Rare and brilliant :)

there should be more of this!! there SO should be more!