ah i loved IT! oh u should add more! please! so much more lmbo this is soo good hehehe..weird i know..but its good! hahaha..

Yeah! I am so happy I found the completed fanfic here on FF! The one on Y!Gallery is broken O_o' but anyways. XD I really enjoy all your HiruSena fanfics. I have to admit though, if I didn't read Iri's profile you made beforehand I wouldn't have any clue what the heck was going on, so perhaps you should make a little note for people to read the profile in order to have a better understanding of what's going on >_>; Actually I am curious about the events of what happened during Sena's pregnancy. =D perhaps I can make a small request that you write a bit of what happened, or what not. I would love to read Hiruma's feelings at the thought of losing Sena like that.

Anyways, great characters, I would be interested in reading more about both Iri and Sui as part of the New Deimon Devil Bats. Haha, just the thought of Hiruma's kids firing automatics at thier teamates...double the ebilness - poor team XD On a personal note, I always found it hard to like OC when it comes to fanfiction, but I've really taken a shine to Iri and Sui (enough to warrant a fanart ^o^) Wah, family portrait just too cute!

Thank you for writing this fanfic and looking forward to more of your work <3

That was absolutely cute and angsty. Awesome.

Hahaha ** spawn that's really cold. Even though I'm not quite sure what's going on I have to say, this was written really good!

not bad ! I like it!

HAHAHA XD poor Sena-chan, stuck with three gun-ho men X3

Is this a sequel to Field Force? It's sort of funny and sweet and confusing x.X