Oh... too sad. I'm like Madison: I like the happy fluff. That's what I live on: Power Ranger fluff & mush. Fluff being happy sweet stuff and mush being Nora Roberts-like writing. A strange combo, yes, but it works for me.

Yeah, little Redhead died of a broken heart, and dang is that appropriate! Great thought--and now I'm jelous! ;)

Nice ending... I never did like happy endings... in some occasions...
Good luck with your humour stories!

-Uchihas1010hyuuga-

this even felt like a bedtime story when i read this haha! nice! :)

Wow, sad and ominous. Made me feel bad for both girls.

where is the dialog aroun here ?

wow, that was so sad... but good too. I liked it