A nice review it is XD

I liked it, there is something about cutting a porcelain colored face and seeing blood that's really beautiful, maybe its the contrasting colors of crimson red on beautiful porcelain skin...

Should have made him lick the blood of slowly >XD <3

First dark DeiIno fic i've read.. i just wish you explored into Ino's feeling during this ordeal and Deidara's (I specially got intrigued on what he'll do if he's done with Ino.. after carving her entire body..I bet Ino thinks she's going to die and she might be right) Overall though, this is wonderfully written.. i hope you write more DeiIno dark fic, you seem to be good at it. (dark sick fics is one of my guilty pleasures..XD)

I hate it when they actually hurt the girl. I do look forward to more akatsuki stories.

This could have been worse in the horror department, but if I were in Ino's shoes, I would have been crying and wanting to die. It would have been horrible for me. I like how it isn't typical smut!

Because let's face it. The Akatsuki would act more like this, than they ever would in a lot of the other fanfics. I think that Kishi would agree. But it would be suprising, if he didn't!

There is another story like this, except the girl gets rapped. It's a Temari and Hidan fic. It's really like this. You should check it out. Because in it Temari finds out why the Akatsuki are so terrifying. Just by her incounter with Hidan.

I think that it would be great to see more fics like these. Especially the KisaSaku fic, you were talking about! I hope you post it!

You have potential but, you need to go a little bit deeper into emotions. Deidara sounded a bit too much like generic sereal killer for my taste. Though I hope you will continue writing more dark akatsuki pairing because, there so rare compared to the fluff.

I love twisted stories and this one was definatly twisted! Awsome! Good job! Deidara found a new canvas to work with when he found Ino. *faves*

Wow...that's definitely sick and twisted, but not in a bad way! Seriously, though, I could totally see Deidara doing something like this. Good job, and hopefully, write another inodei fic!

I thought Deidara was going to blow her up, seriously. Nice change from the typical fanfics. -Shudders at Lovey Dovey Akatsuki- There are a few spelling errors, but none the less good one-shot. =D Can't wait to see the KisaSaku one!