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moleannan
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
Excellent story! Are you going to continue it one day?
Dara-si
2009-10-20 . chapter 14
this is abolutly fantastic story! I´ve seen you write stories in 2009 too, so you are active yet. Plese! I really need to see the continuing og this one:-) and now you go to my favorites
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 14
Oh, oh, the final chapter. I really enjoyed this whole fic but this latest update made it even worthier reading - I like thesuspicion that arose so suddenly and I fear the possible outcome of this. If Waxley or Yaxley would know about Snape's desire to leve - would he not start to gurd both him and Hermione much more? I also wonder if he would not be inclined to use some mind dumbing potions on Snape that would further hinder his recovery - or his attempts to get better, anyway...

In whole: excellent piece. Thank you for writing it for us!
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 13
Two months - much or few time? It depends really, but with his new found attitude it must be enough. (-:
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 11
What a inapropriate offer, one might think - but what a great offer on teh other hand! A place to go outside of the hospital, someone to help him to get around until he is indeed all way better - tempting, tempting. I only hope he will be able to use the offer.
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 10
Nicely done, both the chapters with visiting Harry - I can just envision him acting like he did. But I still think Snape wouldn't have mind some people knowing about his survival (McGonagall, Poppy, Malfoys). Pity that Harry didn't ask again, when Snape got better. But I suppose that both not asking as well as in a sence abondoning Snape in the hospital is very much in character for the boy. I mean, he took care of Snape's survival but there is not (yet) much friendship involved. Let's hope for better future...
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 8
Oh yes, I was wondering when (and if) Harry appears. I also liked Snape to thank the nurse and while you write her a little bit romantic involved, I really appreciate that this is not turning apruptly in a romance.
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 7
Oh yes, please, do read him one of you two and make him again a living person. (-:
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 6
Nice way how to deliver the book - and I don't wonder a bit that she was afraid to loose her job. The book is after all not just any ordinary text, right? (-: I mostly don't like OC, but I don't mind this girl here - well written, I suppose.
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 5
However Hermione was not careful to bring the word "Horcrux" up and however she shocked him, I know this has done the trick to wake him up from his resigned state. Good for them both, indeed, however Wayley or Yaxley meant it.
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 4
Waxley - hmm, I am writting this after having finished the story (or at least what you have written until this point, I really, really hope for a couple more chapters (-:) and to be honest, the similarity in the names had not disturbed me before - but not that they mentioned it, I feel it's very possible. One can only wonder what Waxley meant with "It would be good for you, too." if that is true, though.
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 3
So very good for both of them not to be alone in this hospital. I can imagine that they could help each other a big deal. (-:
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 2
Oh yes, I can see Severus Snape annoyed with this situation - and on the other side so resigned that he is not even attempting to get better. Excellent to picture him like this after the unwanted rescue. Or maybe even wanted but certainly not to this condition.
Iva1201
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
Right, I just explained in a review to your other story why I didn't like HG/SS to you and then I come upon this fic. I started to berate me for even mentioning it to you but then I tried a bit of this and couldn't stop until I reached the very end - it's also not HG/SS as I though just looking at the main characters... (-:

Well, if I praised you other fic, this is MASTERLY! I have noticed that you label it as discontinued which makes me very sad but I enjoyed it very much anyway so I am not going to held it against you, if you truly won't go with it. But it would be really a pity and you actually could finish it with them getting out of the hospital - not necessary the whole story of "afterwards." So a few more chapters maybe... ? (-:
Kaz
2009-04-12 . chapter 14
Wonderful story but it's so addictive that I need more... please
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