Damn, this is so cool!
I come here every day to check if there's a new chapter.
We could really need one, most of the stories here aren't half as good...(-:
Luv, NiNa

your work is absolutely brilliant as always and the way youve crafted this well-rounded fictional story is only too satisfying

your attention to every detail from capturing the realistic elements at every moment to remaining consistent with your creative structure within the saw world is remarkable
it shows that you not only put a great deal of care and work into each installment and this series as a whole, but you also respect the intelligence of your readers

with a mastery and control over your craft you know which direction is necessary to take and best for your story
you have a complete literary sense as a storyteller and it speaks for itself in all of your works

Amazing chapter. I feel so bad for Eric though, especially since we know what's happening. I wonder if Rivelle will feel bad for him when he dies, since his trap wasn't exactly fair, or if she will just accept it because she's so brainwashed by Jigsaw.

Oh, and the last chapter, where Mark and her almost did the deed...I liked his decision to hold off, even though I think it is a little out of character not just for Mark Hoffman, but for men in general, to turn down sex. LOL. Kidding! Hoffman is wonderful...*sigh* And I love this story! I'm about to update my own Saw fanfic soon. :)

man... this story just keeps getting better and better. I think that i must check back once a week to see if you have updated..lol. ITS SO GREAT!! Definitly think about publishing since it's such a good hobby for you

~Kyle

I can imagine the scenes with Rivielle and Eric.M being in the movie, you captured the character really well. Am still completely hooked on this story, you've done such an awesome job!

- K.B

Wow, amazing as always.
I really hope Rivielle makes the right choice at the end!
But I guess, the name of the story could be a good hint towards that ^_^#
Anyway, I'm yearning for new chapters, can't wait to see how the story cotinues...

Luv, your "fan"
NiNa <3

This story of yours is nothing short of fantastic, I hope you know. Definitely one of the best ones in the SAW category to date — and it's long, to! I like how the characters are not too OOC and that yours are also believable. I love how in this chapter, Hoffman refuses hot sex because "she might turn her back on him". I know, they are adults, but I can't help but picture Hoffman as a stereotypical male; as if he would stop Rivielle from coming on to him. Ha ha.

Anyway, keep it up!

Wonderful installent!! I love the constant fluxuation of emotions between Rivielle and Mark. It really makes for a good read. Hope you continue soon x]

-K.B

Excellent Chapter 25 xD I liked the way you worked all the aspects of Rivielle's life-before-rebirth into thus. It was really touching and I can honestly say I felt sorry for her. Can't wait to see how you'll handle the next chapter with Mark!

Much love,
K.B

I love this story. And I HATE Brenda! I even hated her in Saw IV when we see the pictures of her pimping out girls. I was watching it and I said to myself, "Just let her die! She's a sociopath!" Anyway, keep up the great work! And more Mark, please! I <3 Mark Hoffman...

Wow, awesome like always. And so intense...Love it!

Aaw John...<3 *coughs* Nyah...Sorry...^_~#

This is the best SAW fanfic I've ever read! I'm completely addicted ^_^#
You captured John so well and I really feel for Rivielle, I'm so in love with this story!
Please keep on writing, I can't wait to see how it continues...

I really really enjoy this story. I started reading it about a month ago, and its way better than any saw story i've read on here. I CANT WAIT FOR MORE! You really have me hook, line, and SINKER!!

OMFG I love it. I'm afraid, I've become addicted.
But it's okay, it's a good addiction, I guess.

Seriously, thank you so much for updating!
You really made my night ^_^#

Could you please stop doing whatever you do all day and keep on writing 24/7 ?!? PLEASE. O_o#

You captured John SO well! Damn...
And Rivielle...Aw...I really feel for her, my heart is always beating like hell for the whole time of reading.

You made an utterly devoted John-fangirl very very happy tonight! <3

Well, hello there, stranger! Good to see you're still alive, I was missing you and your awesome story. x]
Loved this chapter, as I do all of them, of course. The bit with Mark and Rivielle actually made me choke up a little bit, it was so moving, I actually nearly cried :S Funny in a way, innit? Anyway, hope to chat with you soon and read more of your written works.

Much love,
K.B
(aka xXBlackFridayVampireXx)