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Fallende
2009-11-05 . chapter 4
lol, Bak punched Komui in the face. XD
WhiteSakura
2009-09-24 . chapter 4
Wow! I just love your fanfic and the way you write it!
I love Fou and Bak pairing very much, but there are not much fanfic about them out there!
Please write more! I cannot wait to read how Bak and Fou confess to each other! I just love them!
Coatlicue
2009-09-16 . chapter 4
Oh~!
I'd like to say how much I like your fic but I lack of proper vocabulary...
To put it simply, I'm so in love with this story ! <3 The characterization of Bak and Fo is just great !
Kakashi and BB's Nightmare
2009-09-16 . chapter 4
OH GOD. I love this story so much.

*glares at number of reviews*

People! D:< Realize the pure genius of this!
Holly-Batali
2009-08-26 . chapter 3
So good! Nobody ever does Bak/Fou stories! Update soon please!
uniFsky
2009-06-06 . chapter 3
Bwahahahaha... Bak-chan is so very sad but amusing. XD He's one of those people who are in love with their big-sister-figures from childhood. He tries VERY hard to catch her attention, but just gets laughed at or ignored all the time. And Fou... She acts like the bullying big sister who seems to have an ulterior motive other than the bullying. ^^ Maybe she's trying to toughen up Bak or monopolize him. Heheheh.

I love that scene when Bak's on the train with Won, by the way. I could really see that happening; Won looking disturbed and cautious, while Bak cackles away in maniacal glee while passengers are slowly inching away from him. XD Oh, poor Bak-chan. He thought he could best Fou for once. *cough, never happening, cough*

And the ending! I admit to being one of those oblivious people who never saw that coming when you said "upgrade". *shrivels up in shame* However, I really liked how you made it so that Bak got his jaw dislocated by Fou's attack. It emphasizes how Fou's still not quite used to her new body-size. That, and how enraged she probably is. *snickers* Ah yes, both of them are in quite a quandary indeed. Great job!
stundenglas
2009-06-04 . chapter 3
I want more! I'm addicted xD

In the middle of the chapter I suddenly thought 'what would it be like if Fou would have an upgrade as in 'grow up'?'
Nya! I love your story! And this proved it once more x3
Fallende
2009-06-03 . chapter 3
I actually saw it coming. XD
Anyways, I think you write this very well. Which is odd for me to say, 'cuz I'm usually very critical. You have a wonderful amount of detail and usage of words. It's wonderful, to say the least.
You know, I always thought Fou and Bak would be cute together, but never really cared that much until I saw recent stores, and I realized how ubsessed I was with it.
Anyways, good job, keep it up, awaiting the next update, yadda yadda yadda. ^^
darthgamer
2009-05-28 . chapter 3
awesome chapter please update soon.
AsymmetricalPie
2009-02-17 . chapter 2
Finally! I found a fecking awsome story that doesn't involve yaoi! (Sorry to all those people that like yaoi) This is an excellent story, not at all like the freakish fangirl stories people sometimes write >.< The descriptions are epic. I haven't read a story from D.Gray man that's this descriptive and detailed yet. Update soon! I'll look forward to it :DD
uniFsky
2009-01-27 . chapter 2
Yay! An update! I'm still so hooked onto this story it's embarrassing... *blushes* As for some notable points in this chapter, I really loved the way you portrayed Bak's considerable anger. Like you've mentioned, he's so very similar to Komui in genius and temper; he's bound to throw a tremendously stupendous tantrum of epic proportions. ^^; Not to mention the height of denial (that he likes Fou) mixed in with the rage. Then again, a complicated person will always have a remarkably convoluted way of dealing with things. ^^

And Won, can't forget the ever-faithful manservant Won... He's so brave! *sniffles in pride* Won really deserves a break from all that chaos. Not to mention it's evident that Bak's plotting something again... Great chapter, and I look forward to the next one! ^_~
skrblr
2009-01-23 . chapter 2
I love these characters, and you write them so well! The expressions are just perfectly life-like, and the dialogue's great, and the whole premise is fantastic! Please keep writing quickly...
Just A Realistic Dreamer
2009-01-22 . chapter 2
A BakFou fic!
This pairing needs much, much more love!
Uh, sorry if I sound hysterical, but this is awesome!
So well written, too *_*

Please update soon?
Kakashi and BB's Nightmare
2009-01-20 . chapter 2
There are no words to describe how much I loved this chapter. >w< Bak's temper reminds me of my own, yet sadly, no one takes it seriously. -.-U Please continue!
GoGothGirl
2009-01-20 . chapter 2
-twitch-
honestly.. i wouldnt dare stand within a 10 meter radius of Bak if he's acting like that. i smell revenge and chaos. >.
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