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Artemis Fowl 2nd
2008-11-10 . chapter 4
Well good for you fro finishin it o and i thought this was about narusaku lol not a lil adventure to get home and couldnt they have called their parents huh? But otherwise it was great.



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Artemis Fowl 2nd
2008-11-10 . chapter 3
No offence but no clue to whom tat is srry lol. but this story is hot in my book so keep writin alright.


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Artemis Fowl 2nd
2008-11-10 . chapter 2
Well im seein the love for sakura from naruto but i aint seen narusaku love hopefuly tat is soon!







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Artemis Fowl 2nd
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
Ugh now im hungry see wat u did im hungry now ah! But this seems to be an interesting story u got here ill keep reeadin it as soon as i find somthin to eat *Grumble* Srry my umm stomach is umm yeah.


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yuiitsu.-.amai
2008-10-18 . chapter 3
Uh..that was...Un expected but thanks!
Lol the only reason i write good reviews is because i adore the story and yep..still waiting for that update.
Oh Btw thanks for the kind words. it made my day!
so liek right now..I totally luversz you! (friend way corse)
keep updating!

Lot's of love Yuiitsu-Chan.
Jamez 7777777
2008-10-18 . chapter 2
Nice story, but more detail would help a lot. update soon.
Don't Use Anymore.
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
Good, but A/Ns in the middle of a chapter aren't a good idea. But other than that, it's good.
DetectiveTective
2008-10-03 . chapter 2
Hehehe. Temari works at a fast food joint. You know what would have REALLY been funny? If she messed up the order COMPLETELY (Like, she gave them all fruit and walnut salads or something...)
yuiitsu.-.amai
2008-09-30 . chapter 2
Omg! i totally love your story! Please write more. Once again I love your story!!

I'll be waiting for the next update, alright?!

Lot's of love,

Yuiitsu-Chan.
dbzgtfan2004
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
This is a cute and funny story. Please continue. Narutop and Sakura forever.
true-love-can-never-die
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
Lonely Clown?! 0.o What kind of name is that for a resteraunt?! Besides that (which is VERY odd) it's good so far.
DetectiveTective
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
Oh lord... this is gonna end badly for Naruto and the gang. thsi seems interesting. Keep it up. Also, give MY story a look. It's called, "Ask Naruto." PLEASE GO SEE! You will die laughing! ^_^
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