It's a pity that you didn't continue this story. It would have been a good one, I think. This chapter is good and I really was waiting for the next chapters. But it seems you gave up that story. snif!

I think that this story has great potental, you should really continue!

Ohh, this is really good. I hope you continue it sometime. :D

I'm excited! Can't wait for more!

better update...

HOLY CRAP! THEY R MARRIED! AND TO OTHER PPLE! ja ne!

good first chapter. i cant wait till the next chapter.

What? WHAT?

Good chapter, but what! WHAT?

It stopped so suddenly! T_T... No ilicit kiss on the way to the bathroom, thigh groping under the table? come on! :D

please write more

Dear little girl,

I am reporting most of the Twilight stories in your C2 for abuse. Porn is not allowed on this site. Thank you for listing the stories so I am more easily able to find and report them, leading to their rightful deletion. :)

uhuhu...very interesting...please continue...i am really looking forward to this :)

I smell a continuation of this story, my mind is already whirling with what is going to happen next...

:D

CONTINUE please!:)

i love your story. i hope u dont stop writing this story.

amazing... no other way to say it... please continue soon