 Fem 2009-09-02 . chapter 11 Hi, Am loving this & hoping that you update regularly :)
Can't wait for more. Well written, interesting & good characterisation. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Fem |
 MarshallOC9 2009-06-11 . chapter 11This is a very interesting and compeling story that i really hope your not done with, i really like most of the ideas in it so far except i hope cameron is not permanently disabled. |
 PlayKate 2009-01-19 . chapter 11awesome. you write action very well. |
 jojobevco 2009-01-01 . chapter 11Good Story |
 Pointzip73 2008-12-22 . chapter 11God there are so many cliffhangers everywhere I go. Gah! Whatever I can handle it as long as I don't have to wait too long so update soon or I'll probably end up going crazy. Exciting chapter by the way. |
 Jeremy Shane 2008-12-17 . chapter 11good chapter & more please |
 Jeremy Shane 2008-12-17 . chapter 9good chapter |
 Jeremy Shane 2008-12-17 . chapter 7good chapter |
 Jeremy Shane 2008-12-17 . chapter 5good chapter |
 Jeremy Shane 2008-12-17 . chapter 3good chapter |
 Jeremy Shane 2008-12-17 . chapter 1good chapter |
 Go10 2008-12-12 . chapter 11This is the way season 2 should've been like.
Hope you'll update soon. |
 Jarvey 2008-12-07 . chapter 11Excellent story, very well written! |
 Handerra 2008-12-06 . chapter 11Good job. |
 Augustus Paladin Maximus 2008-12-06 . chapter 11This was a great chapter! It was filled with action and had a nice pace to it. It's just that I wish it was two or three times as long...I can't wait to see what happens next. How is John going to take the chip without damaging Haven? |