|Reviews for Waterfall|
| starnosy 9/4/12 . chapter 2
AMAZING! Just amazing. The whole story is so touching and well written. I was a nervous wreck until the end. I have hoped so badly for a HEA and it was. It is such a sweet story. I love it. It is now one of my fav's.
| GeezerWench 6/25/12 . chapter 2
How romantic! How sexy (without sex), how compelling, sorrowful, touching...
Practically perfect just the way it is.
| I-am-Switzerland00 6/6/11 . chapter 2
Waterfall and two other short stories on this site are my absolute favorites.
Thank you for the entertainment... Outstanding writing!
| I-am-Switzerland00 6/6/11 . chapter 1
You wrote Jasper’s anguish in such a believable way that my own heart broke for him. Then by the end of the chapter you have the reader sighing with Jasper’s “Don’t marry him. Don’t change” line.
| DarknekoKurai 5/18/11 . chapter 2
I love this! Great job!
| LittleRin26 3/18/11 . chapter 2
This would make an awesome full length.
| wendy1969 1/6/11 . chapter 2
wow, that is different it is nice though, it was a little heartbreaking too for some involved.
| Sandra Marques 11/12/10 . chapter 2
They are so beautiful... I love Jasper and Bella couple (just to be more honest with you, I love Jasper, he is my favorite character). And I liked to see then in your story. I just miss his words; I mean, the kiss was great, but I wished he told about his feelings for Bella. Anyway, wonderful job.
| Debbie37 1/23/10 . chapter 2
Wow. I'm glad you made it a two shot, the second chapter just makes it that much more interesting.
| KatieCullen96 12/31/09 . chapter 1
Wow. i almost cried. i seem to do that a lot with Bella and Jasper. i think it's because i feel bad for Alice and Edward. that was great by the way
| laurenparade 8/29/09 . chapter 2
| AliceW 7/30/09 . chapter 2
oh i love it!
I fell sorry for Edward and Alice but Bella and Jasper are a beautiful couple!
Until the last moment I thought they would not be together.
It is a beautiful story.
| AndiePotter-Snape 6/29/09 . chapter 2
| In-love-with-her-guitar 5/9/09 . chapter 2
i can not believe this. I read this story a long time ago and i forgot the name and i so desperately wanted to find it again and now i have i am so happy i found its one of my fav stories ever well done
| barefootduchess 5/3/09 . chapter 2
Beautifully written. So happy, so sad, so... WOW!
Absolutely amazing... but did Alice know? What happened to the Cullens? Alice surely saw it coming! What's going on?