AMAZING! Just amazing. The whole story is so touching and well written. I was a nervous wreck until the end. I have hoped so badly for a HEA and it was. It is such a sweet story. I love it. It is now one of my fav's.

Oh!

How romantic! How sexy (without sex), how compelling, sorrowful, touching...

Practically perfect just the way it is.

Good job!

Waterfall and two other short stories on this site are my absolute favorites.

Thank you for the entertainment... Outstanding writing!

You wrote Jasper’s anguish in such a believable way that my own heart broke for him. Then by the end of the chapter you have the reader sighing with Jasper’s “Don’t marry him. Don’t change” line.

Wonderful writing

I love this! Great job!

This would make an awesome full length.

wow, that is different it is nice though, it was a little heartbreaking too for some involved.

They are so beautiful... I love Jasper and Bella couple (just to be more honest with you, I love Jasper, he is my favorite character). And I liked to see then in your story. I just miss his words; I mean, the kiss was great, but I wished he told about his feelings for Bella. Anyway, wonderful job.

Kisses,

Sandra

Wow. I'm glad you made it a two shot, the second chapter just makes it that much more interesting.

Wow. i almost cried. i seem to do that a lot with Bella and Jasper. i think it's because i feel bad for Alice and Edward. that was great by the way

Beautiful.

oh i love it!

I fell sorry for Edward and Alice but Bella and Jasper are a beautiful couple!

Until the last moment I thought they would not be together.

It is a beautiful story.

update soon!

omg

i can not believe this. I read this story a long time ago and i forgot the name and i so desperately wanted to find it again and now i have i am so happy i found its one of my fav stories ever well done

Beautifully written. So happy, so sad, so... WOW!

Absolutely amazing... but did Alice know? What happened to the Cullens? Alice surely saw it coming! What's going on?