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Reviews for: Teetering heart in the wind
miadk
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
Oh. My. God! What an incredibly heartbreaking story! As I'm typing this tears is running down my cheeks. Very beautifully written!
Sorry for my english, I'm from Denmark ;)
Open Casket Ceremony
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
Okay, I have no idea why I didn't review this earlier...but I must say, that was some interesting story there. Loved the idea and emotion behind it, and all the detail - it was so clear that I could picture it in my head like a movie. Haha.
Speaking of which...THEY SHOULD MAKE THIS A MOVIE.

Haha. Anyway, good job, looking forward to see more stories from you in the (hopefully) near future.
evanescenceangel18
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
Wow this story was really amazing. There was something really poetic about the wedding and getting married right when Shiro was dieing that just made this story so amazing. Poor Ichigo if anything I would have thought that Ichigo was the one that was gonna die and not Toushiro but either way this story was amazing. Love ya forever and ever.
lissatan
2008-10-20 . chapter 1
I love your style of writing. Emotionally enhanced and complex. flashbacks are the best, especially the wedding part. I cried. T_T ichihitsu is L.O.V.E
musicallady1
2008-09-28 . chapter 1
This wasn't a depressing story, but it was very sad. I love Toshiro so I hate seeing him killed off, but you did wonderful work on their impromptu wedding. It was so sweet. I'm a big cry baby, so I have tears spilling even as I write this. I love the ending "Sayonara, Kurosaki Toshiro". Let the tears flow freely now. You did an excellent job on this one-shot. Keep up the awesome work!
Shading Source
2008-09-28 . chapter 1
More IchiHitsu goodness from Kyoya-senpai! Is what I'd normally say, but I can't.

Okay, that came out wrong. Like always, you did one hell of a magnificent job writing this. I'm so envious of your skills.

I'm very impressed with the way you displayed all the details in this fic. I knew you were good at it, but some sentences just forced me to read twice just because I loved the way they were spelled. Honestly, I'm completely blown away after reading this.
But still, killing of Toushi-chan yet again, do you get some kind of kick out of it? ^_^ Making them both suffer so much... It's almost cruel...Were it not for the enhanced reading experience^^
In any case, my compliments once again to you. You've not lost your touch at all. And I cannot wait to read more of you again. (Yes, how are things going? Dare I say it... With OM?)
micky120
2008-09-28 . chapter 1
You really do have a thing about killing poor Toshiro!! This was really sad!!
Micky.
Alleluia Rhapsody
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
While a part of me agrees that Toushiro is dead enough already, I have to say you're very good at killing him...? Nice to hear from you again! Hope all is well!
Lillix Vail
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
Bah you did it again!! You made my upset reading this!! :P But other than that, it was wonderful, it reminded me of doing the exact same thing with my mum when my grandpa died a few years back... and you did get a lot of it right. :)

And I hope you realise that Tou-chan would throw a FIT if he realised his name was the one changed LOL
ShadowedDagger Rips Asunder
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
Haha, you always kill little Toushirou...but I like it. So much angst. Which I love. Depressing fics are my fav. And your vocabulary is amazingly...amazing.
Outlet of Shadows
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
sadly sweet.

anything else you'd point out in particular?
IrukaDono
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
I cried.
Truly and wholeheartedly cried.
It was just so absolutely brilliant. There's just too much to say about how wonderfully beautiful it was.
This was so worth everything.
*goes back to crying*
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