Hi,
Wow! That was cold of The Shadow King, though what do you expect form him! I loved how heroic Mystique is, I wonder what you will have her do to get how she is today, though I am sure The Shadow King has something to do with that. Azazel looks rather like Kurt, except Red don't you think? Hee! Now I can't wait for more! It is so exciting, sorry I didn't get to it until just now! As always a great chapter to a great story! I can't wait to see what goes on form here! Thanks so much!
~Paige

"Unless there was some huge twist involved..."

I love to see that phrase. XD

A long fight scene this time around, and a very well done one. Raven helping Ororo out was very sweet, and the addition of how they met up with Charles. Now, I just wonder when the second Raven-Erik meeting will come...

Very eerie last line, I might add. Update soon!

Love this story so far! Omg, Azazel. This won't end well, I can already sort of imagine how this ends up. Please update soon!

This is awesome, Mystique is by far my favorite. Keep on going!

O...nice chapter! I especially liked the fight scene between Legion and Raven. I was surprised to see Ororo/Storm in, and just like Lucky's Girl said, I'm interested in seeing her connection with Amahl.

I'm loving how you portray Raven, and I'm definitely excited to see where this goes. Update soon!

Hi,
That was very interesting! I really liked the way you had this chapter positioned ten years into the future. I like seeing her personality more hardened, but she doesn't think the way Mystique does. It was interesting to see Ororo added in. I wonder what the connection with Amahl Farouk is? Hee Hee! I liked Legion! He was really cool. There is an X-man roleplaying site that needs villians. If your interested I'll give you the link. Anyways really great chapter, I can't wait for the next! Thanks!
~Paige
P.S I posted another chapter to Mystique's begining

Oh wow! This was great Update Again and Soon!

I love Mystique she is my favorite character. I don't care what anybody says you should definitely continue this story.

Hi,
That was awesome., and really helpfull. I have the first chapter to my Fi called Mystique's beginning. I am looking for some examples and this sis really good. I will recommendi in my story if you want sincce it appears you don't have many reviews! I wish I could review you ten times!! Thanks for the inspiration!
Thanks
~PAige

that was cool
keep going
please

Wow! This was amazing! I never gave much thought to how Mystique met up with Magneto...but you put such an awesome twist on it! The story you had for her was so sad...Alan was so sweet though! I feel bad for Raven, and I'm curious to see how you'll play this out.