I liked this one alot
cuz it sounds like it coudl actually happen
nice jjob and kudos

super cute! id love to continue off of this one. but probably wouldnt get to far for fear of turning it into something lame and stupid

HAHA!! i love it!
it makes me laugh. and agree with everythings sams thinking

Very good!

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to review! This drabble was super cute! I must say you seem to have mastered the Seddie pairing. :D Great job! I'm looking forward to another one!

Well hardy har har, it looks like you’re wrong. I am no longer an anonymous reviewer. It seems that people like yourself, who are writing pointless drabbles, are not happy with my critiquing. So, I have decided to create my own account. The only reason that I am still reading these “so called drabbles,” is because whenever I point out your mistakes you never take the time to correct them. I will give you a few examples of new mistakes:

1.Well, since everyone was convinced that there was no possible way I could tell the truth, I decided that wasn’t going to lie anymore.
2.Freddie found this to be funny any bet me that I couldn’t not tell any lies
3.I was so sure that no one was going to happen, that a miracle had taken place.

(What exactly was it that you were trying to say in these sentences? They made absolutely no sense. And by the way, what exactly is a hide? I don’t think you used correct word choice there.)

I would like you to know that grammar should matter, because it makes you like a poor writer if you can’t spell, authors note or not. It’s still being posted on a site for people to read, and makes you look unintelligent.

Again, I am just trying to make you a stronger writer. Please accept my critique.

nice drabbles,i hope you'll make more seddie drabbles...Ü



~P.S.
will you make a story about them?but w/o the lemon plz?
THX!Ü

I like your drabbles. They are all cute. Haha.

Keep it up.

:3

Look forward to the next one.

Very cute! I love that Sam coulndt controlher smile. I was worried she would secretly like it but seemingly dissmiss it to freddie

i LOVE your drabbles. (im a lil upset about your certain reader hah). personally, i sometimes like them better than actual stories. they're straight-forward and just get right down to the cuteness(:

Maybe not entirely fair to Carly, but Sam was ** off so... As for the anonymous reviewer, I haven't read their reviewers but it sounds like they're a flamer, and flamers suck so... Sorry about them.

Signing off,

Harriss

Yeah, I'd noticed that about his blogs too... Hm...

I think this seems believable however, didn't she accuse him of going through her suitcase? If that's the case then this couldn't have been what happend because she would know how he knew. If that's not the case though, this is what probably happend.

Yes, this does seem like something that would happen if they got together.

Maybe I'm remembering this from fanfics, but I think they call each other by their last names alot. That was the first time though. Also, Sam's reaction was interesting, because to me she seemed more surprised then disgusted. Where as you could tell that Carly was disturbed by the image of Freddie in only socks.

Signing Off,

Harriss.