 ElricKeyblade 2009-10-28 . chapter 1Totally cute, dude. Thanks for writing this! b^^d (The last line was full of win, by the way. XP ) |
 Midnight Ghost 2009-10-10 . chapter 1Sigh. Count on Soul and his ego to make everything sound better than it is. |
 Sincerly- MiSS J 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Aw short and sweet... how cute!
L8r
MiSS J |
 Phoenix Satori 2009-02-02 . chapter 1How adorably pragmatic and Totally Guy of Soul.
Hilarious.
And also very sweet, despite appearances (whatever the hell THAT means).
I'm sure everyone who's reviewed probably agrees that the last line is essentially perfection, and even if you insist that it was generic enough to have been ascribed to whatever couple you could have chosen, you made it work uniquely well for Soul and Maka's dynamic. So, uh, kudos, I suppose.
We definitely need more SE ficcage, and I nominate you to be one of the esteemed few to do it exceptionally well.
Either way, though, thanks for sharing.
This was sloppy-cute-first-kiss lurve. |
 iryna 2008-11-17 . chapter 1I love it! :D |
 YukaYuka 2008-10-11 . chapter 1Aww, realistic and cute. The last line totally made it. |
 Woodrokiro 2008-09-30 . chapter 1That's adorable. And it's such a unique twist; you're right, authors usually romanticize (is that a word?) by making a kiss have a certain taste. I myself have been guilty of it in my fics Dx. Anyways, very creative and cute ^^ |
 sugarboms898 2008-09-30 . chapter 1OMG, I love Soul Eater and I love this pairing! XD When I was reading, I wouldn't stop squealing and by the last sentence I was full-out screaming in joy! I thought it was so good! ^.~ |
 Arhazivory 2008-09-29 . chapter 1lol...Very nice. Really like this little piece. |
 Hana Asahina 2008-09-28 . chapter 1Short, yet cute! And you have a point, tasting like something? Pfft.
lawl, good one! |
 Aneko Nomiya 2008-09-28 . chapter 1hahahaha that was awesome
i like the last line
good job |
 Faeriana Shalanor'e 2008-09-26 . chapter 1lol short very short but I laughed. Yes kisses don't really tase like anything XD good job |
 Moeyjo 2008-09-25 . chapter 1Haha that was cute, and very true! |