Oh my God, I absolutely loved it. It was sweet and very Edward ;D

I like this idea. I'm not sure how I feel about Edward's hostility towards Jacob, but I liked the transformation of Edwards thoughts as he heard the baby.

i loved it!

oh sweet Renesmee

Cute :D

I have just discovered this story and in my opinion it's really amazing. You have stayed true to Edward's character, as he is portrayed in the books and if I hadn't known better I could have mistaken this for an original BD outtake. Great job! :)

I was half crying and half laughing. My little sister was just born today, so this was even stronger for me today. Haha I'm such a dork. Well, I loved it.

~Elizabeth

This was is so sweet! Not 'rusty' at all! =D

amazing!

wow

that was pretty sweet ^^ nice job- sorry the review is short... its 1 am here and i'm tired so yeah... but liked it

Aww:) so cute! :D:D

This was so cute!^^ I can totally see this as being a part of the story if Stephanie had written a part in Edwards pov. It made me all mushy. I absolutely loved it. I like how you showed his transitions, so it wasn't just a boom 'I like the baby now' kinda thing. Very enjoyable.

Aww, adorable.

This is so amazing, and super cute! It made my heart melt. You are a terrific author and have the most unique way to spin words making them sound as irresistable as possible. You are a real diamond in the rough. This is so in character and descriptive. I love all of your work, keep shining!