Sweet, you updated this chapter... I mean come on, I mean-

I forgot what I was going to say but what the hell, you did a really good chapter with thise, really. I.. I... I... read it very fast... ops, pardon but I still had time to read it all but update soon, please, I can't wait to see what happens next!

YAY! new chappy! :)

Yay! You updated! I was wondering when you would.

Walking...walking...and more walking. No wonder they all started to feel like they were going around in circles. At least they all finally found portals, now if they're likely they'll all be together and they can concentrate on rescuing Neil.

Let's hope Theresa's vision has something to do with where Neil's being held or they'll definitely be up the creek without a paddle.

Good job on this one. Try to update again soon.

I really like the new chapter please update soon :)

Finally an update! No one is updating these days! Thank you so much and I hope to read more!

Oh my. This is a magnificent idea! I love it! I can't wait to find out how they rescue Neil and get out of this fairytale land and also find out who or what the pink orb is. Hooray for Sir Archibald! xD Great work and update soon!

AWESOME
CUTE
SWEET
there are a whole heap of words I can type that describes your story. But to sum it all up... it was reali good. Especially this chappie
PLease update more.

Goddess95 :)

I just read this whole story through earlier today, and it's really good.

I could go on and on about everything I like about your story, but I would be here for weeks. The two things that impressed me most were the originality of your story and the fact that the characters were still very much in character (I tend to be a bit picky about that hehe).

I don't think I picked out anything wrong (both you and your beta do a fantastic job).

Looking forward to the next chapter,
~Saani

Well done. Another well written and interesting chapter. I wonder who that pink orb could be and why Fauthia is so determined to keep whoever it is from interfering with her plans. I hope you'll tell your readers soon I'm sure I'm not the only one who's curious.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG ZOMG OMG! AND INFINITY ZOMG!

Jay and Theresa kiss... FINALLY!
And what she says is sweet, "I'd rather dance with the kitchen hand than the prince any day"

HAHAHAHAHAHA Archie punching Edmund's face and he whines "You broke my nose!", with Archie retorting "Hey, it looks better that way". Imagine if it was Neil who was punched in the face... his reaction would be PRICELESS!
And Atlanta kicking Edmund in the head. LOL!

Update soon!
Luv JC XD

Sweet, you updated girl. Alright this chapter was pretty interesting especially with Neil and the orb, nice touch! *sights* Jay dances with Theresa, how sweet. You really should update it if you can because this is starting to be very good and looks to be close to an end.

Sincerely, Thunder-Handicapy-Godess

Neil is freaking me out I must say.

The fight between ARchie and Edmund was funny.

cute Jay and Theresa scene.

HAha! I liked when Herry walked in on them...

All the NEil and authia stuff is kind of creepy...

Sorry, this review hasn't been great, but I'm not really able to think right now. Good job though!

Hey!

this story is so cute and very creative. I especially luv the JxT bitz (huge JxT fan!) it's a great idea, using fairy tales in this story. I'm alittle confused by the mirror and the floating orb things, could you clear me up on that?
Plz update soon

Plz'n'Thnx

Luv Aussie Heorine

Thank you so much for updating! I don't really blame you for the time you took. Writing is very hard, and it takes time. At least that's what I feel when I try to write something. I hope you update the next chapter soon, but take your time.

OH MY GOD!
Thumbs up for that!! Double thumbs up
Do you know how LONG ive been waiting fro you to update? Well I can tell you, it was worth it!
I hate the ciff hangers you leave!! Im like on the edge of my seat... wen you end it, but it makes the next chapter as exiting!
PLEEASSE update, I really want to know what happens with Theresa and Jay!
lol, anyway, thanks muchly,loove the story and idea!!

Goddess95 :)