i love this short fic. so cute :)

Very well done. I like it.

Very sweet piece. Something I could really see Jack thinking to himself. :) And that last sentence just blew me away; almost got tears in my eyes. Bravo!

That was an entertaining read. Wished it was longer though, but hey, it's nice anyways. And thank you for taking the time to post this.

good fic

WOW

Very fitting!

THX

God bless you!

Thara

very nice, indeed.

I really liked this peice. I loved ..."That was the first time he'd seen her as his." Just great!

I totally agree with you here - great bit of writing, but it would have seemed out of place in the middle of chapter 4 of 9th Chevron - but really glad you decided to post it in it's own right. Lovely

Oh, beautiful! I do agree that it wouldn't fit in the story, but I'm so glad that you posted this. So cute, and so real! Thanks a bunch! ~Jess

Oh! Beautifully written :)

Aw, very sweet. I like it! :)

Oh, icky sweetness...Love it!!

Love it and you should have incorporated it in to the story – just my opinion – but I really like it, and now waiting for the next chapter on the Ninth Chevron.

This was really sweet. The ending was very perfect.