 Engelmohr2004 2009-05-11 . chapter 1It was cool just one thing peter has claire healing ablity on top of a likea ton more so how could he have gotten sick just wondering Xd. |
 Charmed Ravenclaw 2008-12-03 . chapter 10Very cornball and sweet. Although if I were Claire I would not be so forgiving toward my father. Still, good read! |
 Charmed Ravenclaw 2008-12-03 . chapter 8Wow, he is still so forgiving to Noah after all that, interesting. It's also interesting putting Caitlin into the mix - I swear everyone has forgotten about her now eh? |
 Charmed Ravenclaw 2008-12-03 . chapter 1I like the way you have written Claire and Peter in an almost fatherly daughterly relationship rather than the usual Paire postings. Interestingly different, although I am curious as to why she isn't with her adoptive family instead or perhaps Nathan. |
 fragmentofamemory 2008-12-02 . chapter 4Very cute ending. =) |
 fragmentofamemory 2008-12-02 . chapter 1Really awesome. I love how it flows all together and it has good grammar. I can't wait to see how the plot unfolds. Very interesting so far! |
 Shivs 2008-11-18 . chapter 10 man that was so good. I'm sad its over...can u write more stories like these? they make me so happy. |
 redrose7856 2008-11-17 . chapter 10Aw. that's cute! I like it! Well done!
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 redrose7856 2008-11-16 . chapter 9Love it! Yay for Claire and Peter family bonding! Thanks for another great chapter!
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 Shivani123 2008-11-16 . chapter 8yay! he's back! awesome |
 redrose7856 2008-11-12 . chapter 7I like this chapter! I wonder where Peter is...
Did u mean to give Claire's friend Samantha the same last name as Eden from season 1? Her real name was Sarah Ellis? That was cool!
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 redrose7856 2008-10-17 . chapter 6Amazing! I can't wait for more! Yay Claire missing Peter!
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 Shivani 2008-10-16 . chapter 6 good question, where is Peter. I miss them being together! |
 Handerra 2008-10-16 . chapter 6Good job. Is that supposed to be West? |
 rlmont91 2008-10-16 . chapter 6Oh I hope Peter's ok!
Great chapter...nicely written.
I can't wait to read more! |