Great seeing this story updated; moving the story along nicely!

Interesting story. Clean, too. Didn't notice any typos. I did like the interaction between Leader-1 and Cy-Kill.

I really like the who Cy-Kill/Leader-1 relationship you've come up with for this story. And Concordia is rather interesting in her own unique way. It's easy to tell how much love you have for Gobots with the way you handle the characters; each has his or her own personality... refreshing story!