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lunarwing
2009-08-04 . chapter 5
i really liked this story because even though it had no lemon it just seemed right the way you wrote it. I also liked the intervention of Touya. I am searching for a story where sakura and syaroan are about to do it, in the middle of it or just done it where there id an intervention from Touya. this is the only story that went close to it. i would like to see how touya would react. so i would be greatful if you write a one-shot about that. keep writing you are a good writer.
love your reader
lunarwing(CCS lover)
tyrant of darkness
2009-04-29 . chapter 5
Hi there!

I wanted to congradulate you on a job well done!!
Very terrific story! I REALLY enjoyed it, though, I wont lie, a lemon would have done nicely ;)

I must admit, your story is the first I've read in a LONG time that didn't really have any spelling or grammar errorss that I noticed. Andd what I liked most about your story was the decriptivenss, I give you 15 out of 10 there.

Anyway, well done! And keep up the good work, hope to read more from you.
Nisawo
2009-04-09 . chapter 5
Another awesome fic from a awesome writer!
XD
Little Dear One
2009-02-26 . chapter 5
Love! Really well written, I love the way you built their older characters, it's very accurate with their personalities. I think you did an awesome job ^_^
White Blossoms
2009-02-01 . chapter 5
Hmm cute last chapter! Great story!

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White Blossoms
2009-01-31 . chapter 4
Wow still kinda, I say that lightly lol inoccent! Great chapter!

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White Blossoms
2009-01-31 . chapter 3
LOL Yay one for team Li - zero for team big brother! Great chapter!

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White Blossoms
2009-01-31 . chapter 2
I swear that you just love a good cronfrontation! Great chapter! It was sweet!

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White Blossoms
2009-01-31 . chapter 1
You do know how to capture people attention don't you? Nice starting chapter, very inoccent lol very unlike you jj's! Great chapter!

White Blossoms
kaipanther
2009-01-08 . chapter 5
i suggest you focus on secret of my heart because that seems the most interesting and most difficult one to write.
EmpKaylenatye
2009-01-08 . chapter 5
Wonderful story. I enjoyed the tenderness that you put into this piece. With it being the first time that they were allowed to explore each other, I found it very insightful.
lilyland10177
2009-01-07 . chapter 5
Love it!
unknown
2009-01-06 . chapter 5
another wonderful story as usau. as to your poll I was going to say go with my sexy boss since it sounds like it will be funny but sugar daddy kind of got me real interested so I say go with that. I hope it goes well for you since no offence you don't have lot of muti-chapters under your belt. still I look forward to your next story.
storyteller87
2009-01-06 . chapter 5
I really like the idea of this sugar daddy story, it really piques my interest I was hoping you might try writing that one, and as always I really enjoy reading what you present.
Musette Fujiwara
2009-01-06 . chapter 5
wow...

I loved how Sakura is simple words told her brotehr to mind his own business...

About the new story... yo have excellenet ideas, but I'm really curious about on in particular - Sugar daddy...

Hopefully you'll write them all in due time...
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