 Draganta the Dragonlord 2009-01-22 . chapter 7Please don't tell me that this is the last chapter. The story is so good that I'm hoping for more. |
 Sparklie-the-Tiger 2009-01-21 . chapter 7Yay! I'm glad Ami no longer blame herself and Spyro's back with Ignitus. Great story! |
 Sparklie-the-Tiger 2008-12-07 . chapter 6that was close one! Keep going, please |
 Draganta the Dragonlord 2008-10-15 . chapter 6Too many sudden cliffhangers and yet they make the story more interesting. Is this the end of the Death Hound or will he kill another victim like in the last story. Keep it going please. |
 Draganta the Dragonlord 2008-10-02 . chapter 5Butt-sniffer? That's a new one but suits the Death Hound very well. The traps were archaic but worked perfectly. Continue the story please. |
 Draganta the Dragonlord 2008-10-02 . chapter 4I must read more since it's so good. Typical of Grayson to forget about what he done to Ami. Now I'd say she'll be the next target for the Death Hound. Please do continue. |
 Sparklie-the-Tiger 2008-10-01 . chapter 3Flame is getting too serious about being a leader and Grayson, I swear I wanna... Do continue please, i like it |
 Draganta the Dragonlord 2008-10-01 . chapter 3Well, I've gotta say, Flame turned out to be a jerk in this chapter due to leadership going to his head and Grayson turned out to be a bully. Lets just hope they can stay allies when the Death Hound comes. Do continue. |
 Draganta the Dragonlord 2008-09-29 . chapter 2Trouble brewing in the Artisans! Now I'm wondering if they'll die or survive. Whatever the case maybe then I'm looking forward to reading it. |
 Draganta the Dragonlord 2008-09-26 . chapter 1A menacing cliffhanger that I definitely like. Strange that a Death Hound would try to eat a Bulb Spider but that's what makes this chapter more interesting. Continue please. |