haha great story. I hate that Fox died

You my friend have a gift. That gift is writing. Loved what you did and I wish they used this for the movie.

Woah, man, I mean. Shit. This Is F-ing Awesome! The best.

Beautiful.

Dude c'mon. Seriously. With that "Damn I can't wait" you're killing me.

They kissed right? Then they killed Sloan together then got married and had cute babies?

I don't really like the ending of the movie. I thought they'd end up together.

So thanks for writing this. But really, continue this story.

They kissed after that i damn well knew they kissed, they kissed didn't they?

Beautiful.

Beautiful film.

Beautiful fanfic.

This was really nice to read, the alternate ending that would've been loved by me. I love Fox. A brilliant character, thanks for writing this! Xxx

I just saw Wanted and really liked it. Except for the fact that Fox dies! I thought she and Wesley would end up together! Anyway, I did enjoy your fic. It was very well written and gave me an alternate ending that I was looking for. Thank you.

Loved it! I really wanted the movie to end this way. Good job.

you should keep writing on this

I like your ending waaaaayyyyy much better. Is there anything I can say that would persuade you to continue this?

Damn right! Fox was WAY too badass to die! That pissed me off! Loved your alternate ending much better.

"Damn I can't wait."

lol

Exactly you pervert

lol

I like YOUR endin' a lot better x]

xoxo

what. the. f. you seriously need to do a sequel. better yet, a series about this. i am ITCHING for a fox/warren fic. i, too, believe Fox is way too badass to have chosen the right thing to do. -,- so. do. us. all. justice. :D Write more!

I really liked this. I only wished that this actually had happened in the movie. And the last line just made me smile. Nice job.

I like this ending way better. I saw the movie yesterday and I was thinking "OH NO!" when the bullet went straight for her head. I really like this ending.

i like it lol you should write some more though it's good