 2009-03-06 . chapter 1 The whole anti-birthday theme was a bit of a refresher; there's only so many ways to say "Yay! Party!" before the audience gets bored, you know? I liked the story... I get a weird vibe from it though. Can't tell if it's good or bad. |
 CryingTearsOfBlood 2009-01-02 . chapter 1aw, cute! I still love Axel and Roxas! The're so cute! XD |
 Miharu-tenshi 2008-11-03 . chapter 1XD it's quite the same like Per Favore (did i get it right? heh.) except now it happens at a bar slash dance slah...mm, i forgot. XD the first thing i thought after reading a few paragraphs is... 'darn, it's gotta be Axel. he's the best present for Roxas~!' xD forgive my fangirly-ness. xD |
 Gaaragirl2020 2008-10-18 . chapter 1That was cute!~ I love it! XD |
 poison-maestro 2008-10-03 . chapter 1woot, i loved this. i like thw way you made the characters, and the story was just all around cool |
 clouded in darkness 2008-10-02 . chapter 1i REALLY liked that! it was really awesome!! and the key-chain!! woop woop!
pity it was a one shot...
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another chappie? pwease?
pretty please with ice cream and a roxas on top??
but yeh i really did like that =) it's hard to explain but i did love it! i found it really cute! |
 sailormulti01 2008-09-30 . chapter 1Aw man! Are you sure you'd rather have this as a one shot? Are you really, really SURE?! This would make an awesome multi-chaptered fic you know. Anyway, loved it, faving it. |
 Kawaii-Gaara-Chan 2008-09-30 . chapter 1Nice. I love your one-shots they flow and have great plots. I can't wait for the next one! xD Lol. Is there such a thing as the sea-salt gin and tequila blend? It sounds so funky. Lol. Love the idea of Axel's keychain, that'd be so awesome, even better if it was a pocket watch! 8D That'd be so cool to own in real life! xD |
 Kiki Lelsissia 2008-09-30 . chapter 1...I have no time for a life anymore and I don't like it. I'm putting off my homework to review this. Which probably isn't good, but hey. Whatever. This alert's been in my inbox for a few days now... it needs to disappear.
This was sweet, in a weird way. Hayner drunk I can imagine. Olette drunk... yeah, that I can imagine. But Pence drunk?! Wow! That won't compute. At least, it didn't until I read this.
Hehe. Adorable. Free drinks from Axel. Why doesn't Roxas like his birthday if this is what happens? Bet he'll like them from now on.
And the last few lines just made the entire thing. Roxas will be doing that again sometime soon, yes?
-Kiki |
 Mika the Rainbow Vampire 2008-09-29 . chapter 1You and your one shots. ::rolls eyes:: I like it though. Tis cute. Have a fantabulous day! |
 smileintears 2008-09-27 . chapter 1i lack the ability to entrance readers with details and an excellent plot as you do. this was absolutely amazing! (bows to the talented person) |
 Night Xiniall 2008-09-27 . chapter 1-snicker- Heh, I liked it. But I think it needs a sequel... o3o Or maybe a second chapter...
-NX. |
 Versute 2008-09-27 . chapter 1Certainly evil, aren't you? Now I actually have to stop being lazy and type out a review. You're so nice.
Anyway... Hayner is quite the joker, isn't he? Must love to see his friends embarrassed. Huzzah for Twilight friendship, though. Always nice to see that.
Reno? Oh come on. Lame. Points for the Reno x Rude, although I'm not sure if it could /ever/ stand up to the lameness of Mr. Sassy and Oh So Idiotic. You'll never turn me.
Okay, I take that back completely. Putting Axel as a bartender forgives any trespasses you may have made in the past. It's just that awesome. Sort of. They're both still lame as can be.
... I feel for Roxas. I really do. You certainly love to put him in embarrassing situations. Moving on...
Aw, that's cute. Axel gave Roxas a birthday present (three, if you count the two drinks, I guess) AND drove he and his friends home. Chivalric of him. ... And then he pecked Roxas on the cheek. Maybe not so chivalric, but it's still cute anyway. Darn you.
... And now I'm done reading. That was too cool. Way too cool. If there was a limit on how cool something could be, you would have exceeded that limit and you would have been fined for the awesome. Yay for AkuRoku, yay for the dedication, blah blah blah. Hope the, uh, 'live' commentary on your fluffy oneshot wasn't too annoying. Yeah. |
 sana-chan9 2008-09-27 . chapter 1oh axel's a STALKER!!
lol jk! XD
i wanna try that drink. :33 |
 sakura's conscience 2008-09-27 . chapter 1are you SURE SURE there can't be more? because i swear this could be the start of something new~. my friend has gone rockers with hsm, i am not. |