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2009-03-06 . chapter 1
The whole anti-birthday theme was a bit of a refresher; there's only so many ways to say "Yay! Party!" before the audience gets bored, you know? I liked the story... I get a weird vibe from it though. Can't tell if it's good or bad.
CryingTearsOfBlood
2009-01-02 . chapter 1
aw, cute! I still love Axel and Roxas! The're so cute! XD
Miharu-tenshi
2008-11-03 . chapter 1
XD it's quite the same like Per Favore (did i get it right? heh.) except now it happens at a bar slash dance slah...mm, i forgot. XD the first thing i thought after reading a few paragraphs is... 'darn, it's gotta be Axel. he's the best present for Roxas~!' xD forgive my fangirly-ness. xD
Gaaragirl2020
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
That was cute!~ I love it! XD
poison-maestro
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
woot, i loved this. i like thw way you made the characters, and the story was just all around cool
clouded in darkness
2008-10-02 . chapter 1
i REALLY liked that! it was really awesome!! and the key-chain!! woop woop!

pity it was a one shot...

...

another chappie? pwease?

pretty please with ice cream and a roxas on top??

but yeh i really did like that =) it's hard to explain but i did love it! i found it really cute!
sailormulti01
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
Aw man! Are you sure you'd rather have this as a one shot? Are you really, really SURE?! This would make an awesome multi-chaptered fic you know. Anyway, loved it, faving it.
Kawaii-Gaara-Chan
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
Nice. I love your one-shots they flow and have great plots. I can't wait for the next one! xD Lol. Is there such a thing as the sea-salt gin and tequila blend? It sounds so funky. Lol. Love the idea of Axel's keychain, that'd be so awesome, even better if it was a pocket watch! 8D That'd be so cool to own in real life! xD
Kiki Lelsissia
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
...I have no time for a life anymore and I don't like it. I'm putting off my homework to review this. Which probably isn't good, but hey. Whatever. This alert's been in my inbox for a few days now... it needs to disappear.

This was sweet, in a weird way. Hayner drunk I can imagine. Olette drunk... yeah, that I can imagine. But Pence drunk?! Wow! That won't compute. At least, it didn't until I read this.

Hehe. Adorable. Free drinks from Axel. Why doesn't Roxas like his birthday if this is what happens? Bet he'll like them from now on.

And the last few lines just made the entire thing. Roxas will be doing that again sometime soon, yes?

-Kiki
Mika the Rainbow Vampire
2008-09-29 . chapter 1
You and your one shots. ::rolls eyes:: I like it though. Tis cute. Have a fantabulous day!
smileintears
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
i lack the ability to entrance readers with details and an excellent plot as you do. this was absolutely amazing! (bows to the talented person)
Night Xiniall
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
-snicker- Heh, I liked it. But I think it needs a sequel... o3o Or maybe a second chapter...

-NX.
Versute
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
Certainly evil, aren't you? Now I actually have to stop being lazy and type out a review. You're so nice.

Anyway... Hayner is quite the joker, isn't he? Must love to see his friends embarrassed. Huzzah for Twilight friendship, though. Always nice to see that.

Reno? Oh come on. Lame. Points for the Reno x Rude, although I'm not sure if it could /ever/ stand up to the lameness of Mr. Sassy and Oh So Idiotic. You'll never turn me.

Okay, I take that back completely. Putting Axel as a bartender forgives any trespasses you may have made in the past. It's just that awesome. Sort of. They're both still lame as can be.

... I feel for Roxas. I really do. You certainly love to put him in embarrassing situations. Moving on...

Aw, that's cute. Axel gave Roxas a birthday present (three, if you count the two drinks, I guess) AND drove he and his friends home. Chivalric of him. ... And then he pecked Roxas on the cheek. Maybe not so chivalric, but it's still cute anyway. Darn you.

... And now I'm done reading. That was too cool. Way too cool. If there was a limit on how cool something could be, you would have exceeded that limit and you would have been fined for the awesome. Yay for AkuRoku, yay for the dedication, blah blah blah. Hope the, uh, 'live' commentary on your fluffy oneshot wasn't too annoying. Yeah.
sana-chan9
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
oh axel's a STALKER!!
lol jk! XD
i wanna try that drink. :33
sakura's conscience
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
are you SURE SURE there can't be more? because i swear this could be the start of something new~. my friend has gone rockers with hsm, i am not.
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