this is good great job.

Oh i loved it! there just aren't enough stories about liz donnelly and there need to be

HAHAHA

I loved this! What an interesting situation for Liz. You wrote her to a tee, by the way.

' The blonde, pigtailed little girl stood up and put her hands on her hips. “Are you a cop?”

Liz regarded her with amusement. “Are you a midget?” '

I laughed out loud when I read that. Great, great job!

Yes! I love Liz! She may not be Mary Poppins, but the movie would have been a lot more funnier if she was! (Julie Andrews, you are still amazing.)

This has got to be one of the cutest things that I've ever read. 3 Thanks for sharing!

this was absolutely hilarious! Great job! (:

That was hilarious! That first line "Do I look idle to you detective?" was so quintessentially Liz I could actually hear her saying it! And I loved how Lizzie was trying to be like her. Bravo :)

I LOVED this story! You had me chuckling all the way through it.

VERY good writing and very good characterisation! Well done and thank you for making me laugh. :)

LOL! loved it, laughed all the way trough:D great work, would love to see more situations like this:D

LMAO! 'Does the Prosecution need a bathroom break?' I almost died!

Haha! That was funny as, great work :)

HA HA that was funny! i loved it

HAHAHAHAHAHA!That was so freaking funny!Please write more!How about Donnelly getting "revenge" on Elliot?

that was the funniest fucking thing ever!