 Cry LaVey 2009-11-09 . chapter 1beautiful. made me cry in the end. |
 wattstl 2009-11-08 . chapter 1Wow. That was beautiful...and heartbreaking. Thank you. |
 at 2am 2009-10-29 . chapter 1This made me bawl uncontrollably the first time I read it - EXCELLENT PIECE. |
 meggster2608 2009-10-29 . chapter 1I cried, I sobbed, I want to freaking die because of Jacob.
You changed my whole perspective. I love Jacob now. Great story, I really do wish that jAKE will get his happy ending. |
 mudpuddledemon 2009-10-27 . chapter 1Really, really, really, notenoughreallysinthewholeworld good. |
 nightdhade 2009-10-27 . chapter 1This is the first story
to ever instill so much, emotion in me
ever
It made me sad, and even though I was never a Bella/Jacob fan I really almost wish it had happened
thanks for making me cry D':> |
 BellaBlack96 2009-10-25 . chapter 1--Beautiful! Unlike Bella, I can still cry. . . and right now I'm sobbing. Now I'm just hoping I won't stay this sad because the idea of a dead Jacob Black is planted inside my brain. But in a way I'm still glad I found this story. I never liked Nessie, and sad that Jacob realized his mistake too late but at least he realized it. I wanted so badly in Eclipse for them to say "Screw it all! Let's get together!" Now, the decisions they made were irreversible, and now that they want to make things right again, the way they were supposed to be, it's just too late.
I couldn't hold back the tears the moment I read...
“Ness,” Jacob whispers, and she lays her head down on his chest and cries. His fingers gently tangle in her hair. “Love you.”
Nessie is unable to respond, lost in her grief.
Jacob keeps patting her hair, but his eyes search out and find Bella. “Love you,” he mouths. “Always.”
“Always,” she mouths back.
There was a definite distinction between his goodbyes. He just loved Nessie, but would love Bella [always].
Amazing story. Bravo! Just so captivating and emotional to anyone with a heart. -Sobs- Poor, poor Jake and Bella... |
 DylanParker 2009-10-21 . chapter 1wow! this was amazing, i'm not even sure of what to say...i'm seriously crying after reading this. i know you warned about angst (i'm an angst junkie, btw) but this is the most angst filled story i've *ever* read and i have read a lot!
it was so sad, but oh so great! my heart has been broken in the best way! it was beautifully written. |
 Ahmose Nefertari 2009-10-09 . chapter 1wow..i cried..and I had a knot in my throat during all the reading..beautiful and painful... |
 Lori94 2009-10-05 . chapter 1Tears pouring down my face! I would never have imagined it this way!
The imprinting SAVED Jacob years of pain. It was FREEDOM! Freedom from the pain of watching Bella live a vampiric (un)life happy with Edward and Freedom from pining the way Bella did for Edward!
Bella chose Edward and she NEVER changes her mind! Her feelings about him would NEVER change.
This is so sad! How Edward must feel during these scenarios is beyond tortured! Bella would HATE making Edward feel bad. |
 solchusss;) 2009-09-30 . chapter 1 i teared up a bit. and that NEVER happens - i'm a cold-hearted biatch. i think that speaks for itself. |
 Fumi Mandrake 2009-09-28 . chapter 1This is the most beautiful fic I've ever read. I swear. I can't stop crying!! Amazing... I really want to tell you all the details that have made me fell in love with your fic, but i'm spanish... I've got no problem with translation, but this is too much for me xD
Well... Thanks for write this piece and share it with us. You've made my day... No, my week! (i'll read it again in 2 days, that's for sure)
Thanks. Thanks. Thanks.
P.D. Tengo que poner algo en castellano, si no no me quedo contenta xD En serio, me ha encantado. De principio a fin. He disfrutado cada palabra, y todas las lágrimas que Bella no tiene parece que me las ha dado a mí! |
 Adriians-Liil-Dhampiir 2009-09-27 . chapter 1I cried in this one :( so sad but i really did love it :D
its so sad
Jacob does belong with Renesmee but a Part of him will always Belong to Bella :D |
 LovesWolvesNVamps 2009-09-25 . chapter 1Wow. That was very good. Very believable.
I loved it. |
 chelsea-chee 2009-09-24 . chapter 1Oh... my goodness gracious. I was tearing up at the end! Now this... this is a story that makes me love Jacob/Bella. Seeing a story like this makes me wish that this ending actually happened. The way you went through plenty of years, showing all the many different things that happened throughout it, I loved.
Gosh, there is probably so much more I need to say about this, but I just can't. I feel in shock because I'm just so... so amazed. I loved it. Totally & truly loved it. Wonderful, wonderful job. Thanxs. :) :p ;) |