WOAH! I am deeply moved xO At first I was a little confused. You said the number indicated which person was talking; I thought it was 1 xemnas ; 2 Xigbar etc,. Especially when '2' said that he 'got in the way' I pictured a gun. lol I was mistaken. I've got some idea but I don't want to say in case I'm extremely wrong and that offends you xD It's SO grey and I've re-read it like 15 times now, and (great job) it could be taken so many ways! I get hints of their characterizations through the tone and kind of remorse, but if I really think about it (and I am x-x), "Oh Roxas I'm sorry so sorry" could mean the Roxas was the one who died, or '1' watched someone else die and felt that he betrayed Roxas' by doing so! Okay, I'm pretty shure that '2' is Demyx. But '3' ... I want to say it's Saix... but I'm sort of convinced that it's Roxas. I'm convinced that '1' is Axel. But does this all happen at the same time? In which case, I really /am/ wrong? Bah! Who's '4' ? D: Gosh this is like ... 39 clues or something xP But anyway, I love this style. If you meant to be mysterious, my god, you win that. '2's last stanza was unbelievable! So much emotion, I had to re-read that part the most. Truly amazing. It's a definite win

YHS

xDelfin

hey girly. aww it's all emo and sad :( but i knew it would be. anyway the only thing i gots a problem with is you didn't break apart the sections between axel roxas and demyx