I loved the story!! you are a romantic genius. you took to characters who would never normaly meet and made them a couple!! Keep an eye open for my storys would you?

Your friend, GoldYogsothoth

I never realy saw Yoshimitsu as young but then again who knows? It was a great stoy and I hope there are more to come

I was unsure about this pairing at first, but I think you've made me a fan. Exceptionally well written with thoughtful characterisation and situations, this was a stunning work of fanfiction. Mystical, strange and beautiful-you explored every inch of their relationship. Great work. x

This made me laugh. It's so innocent, but naughty.

Wow that is some game of chess ha? Yoshi wins but what LOL :)

lol Talim shoud never ever play poker shoud she LOL nice job by the way

Quickie here:
That last line is genius.
That is all.

Oh my Gosh...This was just as good as the last chapter! This story is so chraming and lovely. I can't wait till the next one! Update soon, please.

Oh how sweet will Talim ever see Yoshis face? I hope so lol >]

Wow. That was...vivid.
I'm not really sure, but you've managed to somehow managed to create a scene that is both deeply romantic and...uh...slightly creepy at the same time.
I really need to find time to read the rest of this...

Oh my goodness. This is really good! I think you're the only person on this sight that does a Yoshimitsu/Talim pairing...But who cares? You dare to be different and I like that! Keep up the good work!

Ok so to verify this was a flash back right? And do I even need to ask what hapins next LOL

Yah I um read this agen and um yah I swaere to never rush a review agen *looks at other review left for chapter* wow LOL hay see you on Gaia

...O.O well that is one way to um..er..Work out some bent up stress (is it jest me or did they actaly go um all the way) your use of langege makes me jeluse by the way and you have given me some grate ideas for my book LOl

One agein I need to say it Yoshimitsu is tactliss very much so